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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Dec 17, 2015 18:08:28 GMT -5
I'm glad you liked it  I actually thought having Zoldius fight Dooku and Sidious was going to be a fan-favorite moment this season but it turns i might've made a mistake then. I tried to make it look like several times that Zoldius was having an incredible hard time fighting them and that if the Redemption didn't show up Sidious probably would've killed him. I kinda see Zoldius at the same level of power as Dooku. I was more worried about the romance feeling cheesy or forced instead of a natural romance. The romance was done pretty well IMO. And the fuel was cool but maybe Sidious just felt really underpowered. Like maybe someone else could've taken his place. Hmmm... well i haven't really done anything with Sidious since ROTJK and he didn't do that much there either. So i'm geussing i still got some ways to improve on  I just hope that Zoldius hit all the right marks as a villian and character. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Dec 17, 2015 22:39:37 GMT -5
The romance was done pretty well IMO. And the fuel was cool but maybe Sidious just felt really underpowered. Like maybe someone else could've taken his place. Hmmm... well i haven't really done anything with Sidious since ROTJK and he didn't do that much there either. So i'm geussing i still got some ways to improve on I just hope that Zoldius hit all the right marks as a villian and character. Yeah, Zoldius is good. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Dec 17, 2015 22:40:18 GMT -5
IDK, I'm kinda nitpicky. It was still a really good episode.
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Dec 18, 2015 7:08:34 GMT -5
IDK, I'm kinda nitpicky. It was still a really good episode. Hey i don't mind. Helps me improve for future episodes |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Dec 28, 2015 9:45:37 GMT -5
Episode 15 Trivia: - I asked Maverick-Jedi-Valen if it was alright to make Zoldius a Maverick Marshall. We eventually started coming up with ways to combine our universes but still keep them seperate at the same time. However Sidious spoke of banishment. So is Zoldius a true Marshall? We will find out later this season. - When i said that Haracus was going to have a bigger role later on in the series i meant him joining the Redemption Crew. - The lightsaber battle in the throne room and Sidious's appearance was a reference to "The Lawless" - The part with the Wizard Gul'nar will come into play later on in the season - Evangeline's sister Daisy was mentioned a couple of times. She will appear in this season. - Although not seen, Ragnarok did not kill everyone in the mine since Zoldius ordered a retreat before he could. - I was going back and forth with myself wether i should kill Sawano in this episode or not. He died in the original draft of the script but i later changed to him surviving. Then i changed it again several times during production but eventually decided to stick with the original script. - The kiss between Ravi and Evangeline wasn't in the original script but i included it anyway since it felt right. - Sawano is named after one of my favorite composers "Hiroyuki Sawano" - I hoped for the lightsaber duel to be the highlight of this two-part arc - The crystals the people of Cormellia harvested were taken away by Zoldius and his acolytes when they fled the planet - I didn't show the stand-off between Ayase and Avery because it would've been too much lightsaber battles in one episode - I replaced Evangeline's tree with black lego parts in this episode to show it was burned - Haracus shot Han Solo when they entered the Redemption Bridge. This was unintentional - Sawano mentioned a "Core" This is Zoldius original plan that hasn't been shown yet - Zoldius speaks of his morales and dreams. Something he archieved in this arc. It is unclear as of yet what these are but they might have something to do with his backstory - Although unmentioned. Zoldius does have a base of operations with more acolytes somewhere in the universe - Cormellia will return - A romance between Natalie and Haracus seems to begin - Elonara also cameo'd in the last episode during Zoldius appearance - Gul'nar is unrelated to Darren even though they're both wizards. Gul'nar can still use magic. - Gul'nar is based on the "Warcraft" and "World of Warcraft" character Gul'dan
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Apr 24, 2016 8:52:05 GMT -5
Sorry of the long wait but it is now over! Episode 16 - Radiation Proclamation has been fully uploaded Watch the Episode here: www.flickr.com/photos/100712891@N04/26273506640/in/dateposted-friend/After losing communications with an asteroid mining facility the Redemption and its crew go into investigate. During their investigation they try to uncover what has happend at the base while looking back at that past that brought them togehter on the ship itself... |
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Post by Spidyyr on Apr 24, 2016 12:29:13 GMT -5
Sweet
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Post by Spidyyr on Apr 25, 2016 19:49:27 GMT -5
That was a very interesting and episode. It was really cool to see all the backstories and this was a nice way to do it. My favorite part was seeing the old-era Skelly and Ravi. Not the most action packed or ground-breaking, but something different and fun.
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Apr 27, 2016 10:00:45 GMT -5
Loved how nostalgic this episode got. Got a weird feeling seeing Cyborg's backstory in detail (which by the way was fantastically well visualised). Geez, I remember writing that story up ages ago... For a moment I thought it was a stand along story, until Zoldius got involved, so I'm glad you're keeping up with the whole connected saga. What I loved though was just seeing all those flashbacks, since I always have a soft spot for those kinds of stories |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 20, 2017 18:11:24 GMT -5
Can't believe i've let you guys hanging for almost a year  The hiatus is almost over though! |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 21, 2017 13:19:57 GMT -5
Here it is: Episode 17 - The Ambush GamesThe first episode done in the written forward. Note that the writing is very simple and mostly done in the same fashion as i did the text for the pictures on flickr.com. This way i tried to kept the original feel of the show intact without even to go into unnecessary prolonged texts of detail. Most is open to the interpitation of the reading as a good story should be I hope this new format works for you guys too. I will edit some pictures in later. But for now: theambushgames.wikia.com/wiki/The_Ambush_Games_(Episode)Enjoy! |
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Post by Spidyyr on Mar 21, 2017 15:54:46 GMT -5
Here it is: Episode 17 - The Ambush GamesThe first episode done in the written forward. Note that the writing is very simple and mostly done in the same fashion as i did the text for the pictures on flickr.com. This way i tried to kept the original feel of the show intact without even to go into unnecessary prolonged texts of detail. Most is open to the interpitation of the reading as a good story should be I hope this new format works for you guys too. I will edit some pictures in later. But for now: theambushgames.wikia.com/wiki/The_Ambush_Games_(Episode)Enjoy! You had the edit link in your comment so I took it out I'll start reading it now.  |
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Post by Spidyyr on Mar 21, 2017 16:46:45 GMT -5
Read it. Pretty interesting to look at an actual narrative of the games.  Even without the pictures it was pretty entertaining and it was descript enough to envision. And oh crap that ending.  |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 21, 2017 18:35:59 GMT -5
Here it is: Episode 17 - The Ambush GamesThe first episode done in the written forward. Note that the writing is very simple and mostly done in the same fashion as i did the text for the pictures on flickr.com. This way i tried to kept the original feel of the show intact without even to go into unnecessary prolonged texts of detail. Most is open to the interpitation of the reading as a good story should be I hope this new format works for you guys too. I will edit some pictures in later. But for now: theambushgames.wikia.com/wiki/The_Ambush_Games_(Episode)Enjoy! You had the edit link in your comment so I took it out I'll start reading it now. Ow oops xD. I was in a hurry to it must've missed that. Thank you for editing it |
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Post by Spidyyr on Mar 21, 2017 22:59:33 GMT -5
But yeah, this is probably the episode I've been looking forward to the most since it was announced and it delivered.
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Jan 9, 2018 14:38:01 GMT -5
Well we have reached this point. The ending of another season! While certainly there were some bump on the road getting this season out there (looking at my own slow pace) I think this season turned out fantastic and almost exactly like i pictured it. Even though the last few eps are without pictures So with further ado, Here are the episodes. I hope you all enjoy and i hope it was worth the wait. Episode 18: Return To Cormellia:theambushgames.wikia.com/wiki/Return_To_Cormellia"The Redemption crew returns to Cormellia to celebrate a special occasion. This causes Ravi and Evangeline's relationship to be tested however. Meanwhile dark forces gather in the Cormellian woods..." Episode 19: The Broken Time:theambushgames.wikia.com/wiki/The_Broken_TimeThe second episode of the "Time Arc" Episode 20: The Wedding of Ravi-Idej:theambushgames.wikia.com/wiki/The_Wedding_of_Ravi-IdejThe third and final episode of the "Time Arc" and the season finale. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Jan 10, 2018 10:22:58 GMT -5
I noticed a lot grammatical errors or missing words during my second read.
If anything bothers you feel free to edit. I don't have the time right now but i'll check it out later if i can fix anything.
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Post by Spidyyr on Jan 10, 2018 18:08:08 GMT -5
Read Episode 18. Definitely went in a direction I did not expect. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jan 14, 2018 19:32:54 GMT -5
Read Episode 19 finally! Dang that was super intense. Nicely done!
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Post by Spidyyr on Jan 18, 2018 18:16:45 GMT -5
Finally Read Episode 20!!! It was epic. I loved the battle between Ravi and Zoldius and the depth added to Zoldius. Also cool was how the Marshalls were addressed. Since the title was revealed, I always wondered how this episode would go down, and it was much more tragic than I expected! Really well done, Ivar!
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Jan 19, 2018 8:34:19 GMT -5
Finally Read Episode 20!!! It was epic. I loved the battle between Ravi and Zoldius and the depth added to Zoldius. Also cool was how the Marshalls were addressed. Since the title was revealed, I always wondered how this episode would go down, and it was much more tragic than I expected! Really well done, Ivar! The title doesn't have much to do with the episode except for that one scene. But i thought it would be an intrigueing title without too many spoilers. And of course the story arc comes full circle at that particular scene. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jan 19, 2018 12:38:18 GMT -5
Finished reading through the first two. No doubt this is one of the weirdest storieslines you've made and there's absolutely nothing wrong with that Loved how easy it was to envision how it would've looked had it had sets. That duel in Broken Time was bone breaking brutal I'll definitely see if I can get round to readin the finale sooner rather than later. Also, nice touch with how you used the scum team in Infiltrators. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Mar 4, 2018 5:54:21 GMT -5
Sorry it took so long, but I finally got round to seeing that finale. Fittingly emotional, enormous stakes and scale. Awesome. Even without Evangeline kicking it, it still would've felt very melancholy, since the foreshadowing of Infiltrators and Jedi Knight are always there as dark reminders. Really fitting way to finish off the show, Ivar. Stellar effort, gold medal stuff. Still, I wouldn't at all complain over any more continuations |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 7, 2018 16:50:47 GMT -5
I geuss you could say Rebels explained the whole Ravi/Evangeline floating in space time thingy with the episode "A World Between Worlds" |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 28, 2019 13:45:18 GMT -5
Looking back, I hope my writing is better now. I've made so many grammatical errors xD Or used phrases and words in the wrong context. Ah well, at least people enjoyed it. Feels almost cruel i'm leaving you guys hanging for so long for this so called 'Movie' i planned for this.
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Oct 29, 2019 4:17:17 GMT -5
Looking back, I hope my writing is better now. I've made so many grammatical errors xD Or used phrases and words in the wrong context. Ah well, at least people enjoyed it. Feels almost cruel i'm leaving you guys hanging for so long for this so called 'Movie' i planned for this. It's cool dude, brings up the suspense |
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Post by Spidyyr on Oct 29, 2019 8:53:41 GMT -5
Faster than GRRM
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Nov 8, 2019 13:17:21 GMT -5
So i'm just gonna be honest. I'll probably never write the complete 'Redemption Movie' I just don't have the time (or patience ) for it. However i will write down a full plot summary of what i had in mind to be the series finale. The same thing goes for another Rise Trilogy, set before The Force Awakens, i had planned and written at some point. So at least there is something to look forward too! And it just makes me feel a lot better to finally give this its proper closure. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Nov 8, 2019 20:21:35 GMT -5
So i'm just gonna be honest. I'll probably never write the complete 'Redemption Movie' I just don't have the time (or patience ) for it. However i will write down a full plot summary of what i had in mind to be the series finale. The seem thing goes for another Rise Trilogy, set before The Force Awakens, i had planned and written at some point. So at least there is something to look forward too! And it just makes me feel a lot better to finally give this its proper closure. I feel this |
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I actually thought having Zoldius fight Dooku and Sidious was going to be a fan-favorite moment this season but it turns i might've made a mistake then. I tried to make it look like several times that Zoldius was having an incredible hard time fighting them and that if the Redemption didn't show up Sidious probably would've killed him. I kinda see Zoldius at the same level of power as Dooku. I was more worried about the romance feeling cheesy or forced instead of a natural romance. 
I just hope that Zoldius hit all the right marks as a villian and character.
Even without the pictures it was pretty entertaining and it was descript enough to envision. 
