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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 19, 2013 6:22:40 GMT -5
Like i promised you all for today! The exclusive ' Teaser Preview' of Rise of The Redemption! Watch Episode 1: Rescue Mission here: www.flickr.com/photos/100712891@N04/10358890323/ There is no known date for Episode 2 - Into Deep Space. This board will be used for the posting of Episodes, the discussion of Episodes and more. Read: I wan to do something different. Please, after you've watched the episode, leave a rating from 1 to 10. This way i can see what you guys thought it and if i can improve. And what will in the end be your favorite episode  I'm going to do this with every episode Please do this  Enjoy!! |
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Post by Spidyyr on Oct 19, 2013 6:59:21 GMT -5
Awesome Episode! I honestly loved it! All it needed were some lens flares and "Space, the final frontier..." . But since I have no other episodes to compare it to yet, I'm gonna give it an 8 as there may be episodes even better |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Oct 19, 2013 8:51:56 GMT -5
Flipping awesome premiere Ivar  The Star Trek references were perfectly dotted around and the scenes involving the ships were fun to watch. Writing was spot on and I especially liked the part where Cyborg gets the chair For the sake of their possibly being even better episodes, as Spider said, I'll score it 9/10. I must say though the scenes involving the people who would be scum in Rise II felt weird, since I knew they were going to turn into a bunch of jerks in the future |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 19, 2013 9:31:44 GMT -5
Flipping awesome premiere Ivar The Star Trek references were perfectly dotted around and the scenes involving the ships were fun to watch. Writing was spot on and I especially liked the part where Cyborg gets the chair For the sake of their possibly being even better episodes, as Spider said, I'll score it 9/10. I must say though the scenes involving the people who would be scum in Rise II felt weird, since I knew they were going to turn into a bunch of jerks in the future As long as it didn't ruin the enjoyment They aren't scum here yet though |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 19, 2013 9:32:10 GMT -5
Awesome Episode! I honestly loved it! All it needed were some lens flares and "Space, the final frontier..." . But since I have no other episodes to compare it to yet, I'm gonna give it an 8 as there may be episodes even better Just for fun i might just do that |
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Post by Kenbo on Oct 19, 2013 9:49:45 GMT -5
I loved the episode! It had a great story and the sets just made it even better. I think I will also give it am 8/10 for the reasons Spider said
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Post by Newan on Oct 19, 2013 9:55:42 GMT -5
Amazing premiere for the "Rise of the Redemption" series. I loved the interior of the Redemption it looked very done. And I must say you're probably one of if not the best at dialogue for characters. Like previous people said I'm not going to give it a perfect score since we have nothing to compare it with but I have a feeling you will have episodes twice as good as this one in the future  . 9/10 is my rating for the first episode and I am looking forward to what more the series has to offer. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 19, 2013 10:15:52 GMT -5
Amazing premiere for the "Rise of the Redemption" series. I loved the interior of the Redemption it looked very done. And I must say you're probably one of if not the best at dialogue for characters. Like previous people said I'm not going to give it a perfect score since we have nothing to compare it with but I have a feeling you will have episodes twice as good as this one in the future . 9/10 is my rating for the first episode and I am looking forward to what more the series has to offer. That is just great to hear I hope to have better episodes in the future yes I didn't think the dialogue was that good but if you say so |
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Post by Newan on Oct 19, 2013 10:17:41 GMT -5
Amazing premiere for the "Rise of the Redemption" series. I loved the interior of the Redemption it looked very done. And I must say you're probably one of if not the best at dialogue for characters. Like previous people said I'm not going to give it a perfect score since we have nothing to compare it with but I have a feeling you will have episodes twice as good as this one in the future . 9/10 is my rating for the first episode and I am looking forward to what more the series has to offer. That is just great to hear I hope to have better episodes in the future yes I didn't think the dialogue was that good but if you say so I meant in general not just the episode but I thought it was very well done. Or maybe your dialogue just stands out in a different way then other people's. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 19, 2013 14:01:56 GMT -5
So what i do to determate the score is take all the scores given and divide them through the amount of people. So for now it's: 8+9+8+9 = 34 Then i take 34:4 = 8.5 So far, from the first 4 viewers the episode gains an impressive 8.5!! This really encourages me alot! |
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Post by Star on Oct 19, 2013 16:14:12 GMT -5
So what i do to determate the score is take all the scores given and divide them through the amount of people. So for now it's: 8+9+8+9 = 34 Then i take 34:4 = 8.5 So far, from the first 4 viewers the episode gains an impressive 8.5!! This really encourages me alot! What if I........ Gave a 0/10.......?  JK I wouldn't. I still need to finish the episode but so far it's great! |
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Post by Star on Oct 20, 2013 0:10:51 GMT -5
A very solid episode, Ivar! The settings were great, especially the cockpit. The references to Star Trek were cool. And the space battle pics were neat too. And I thought the villain was pretty interesting even though we didn't see much of him. The whole teleportation thing was nice as well. and I thought having them going onto the ship instead of fighting right away was a good touch. Same with the whole Cyborg talk (It may have made more sense though if I had played Sabetours. Still was good). I also believe that's happened a lot in ST as well. And forgive my memory, I've forgotten (  ) but did the whole second leader occur in Into Darkness? I know it has in TOS. And the fact that it introduced the main characters and setting was good for a premiere. 8/10 I thought, like stated before, it was a solid episode. And I believe that there are many more better episodes coming up. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 20, 2013 5:36:37 GMT -5
A very solid episode, Ivar! The settings were great, especially the cockpit. The references to Star Trek were cool. And the space battle pics were neat too. And I thought the villain was pretty interesting even though we didn't see much of him. The whole teleportation thing was nice as well. and I thought having them going onto the ship instead of fighting right away was a good touch. Same with the whole Cyborg talk (It may have made more sense though if I had played Sabetours. Still was good). I also believe that's happened a lot in ST as well. And forgive my memory, I've forgotten ( ) but did the whole second leader occur in Into Darkness? I know it has in TOS. And the fact that it introduced the main characters and setting was good for a premiere. 8/10 I thought, like stated before, it was a solid episode. And I believe that there are many more better episodes coming up. Cyborg never appeared in Saboteurs So it wouldn't have helped much What do you mean with second leader? |
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Post by Star on Oct 20, 2013 8:53:50 GMT -5
A very solid episode, Ivar! The settings were great, especially the cockpit. The references to Star Trek were cool. And the space battle pics were neat too. And I thought the villain was pretty interesting even though we didn't see much of him. The whole teleportation thing was nice as well. and I thought having them going onto the ship instead of fighting right away was a good touch. Same with the whole Cyborg talk (It may have made more sense though if I had played Sabetours. Still was good). I also believe that's happened a lot in ST as well. And forgive my memory, I've forgotten ( ) but did the whole second leader occur in Into Darkness? I know it has in TOS. And the fact that it introduced the main characters and setting was good for a premiere. 8/10 I thought, like stated before, it was a solid episode. And I believe that there are many more better episodes coming up. Cyborg never appeared in Saboteurs So it wouldn't have helped much What do you mean with second leader? I meant how Cyborg became temporary leader of the Redemption (second leader). And I remembered that it did happen in Into Darkness. Spock did what Cyborg did while Kirk was transported onto Khan's ship. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 20, 2013 9:03:32 GMT -5
Cyborg never appeared in Saboteurs So it wouldn't have helped much What do you mean with second leader? I meant how Cyborg became temporary leader of the Redemption (second leader). And I remembered that it did happen in Into Darkness. Spock did what Cyborg did while Kirk was transported onto Khan's ship. Oh wow... now that you mention it is kinda the same thing yes. I didn't even notice that when i wrote the script or filmed the scene's |
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Post by Star on Oct 20, 2013 9:05:11 GMT -5
I meant how Cyborg became temporary leader of the Redemption (second leader). And I remembered that it did happen in Into Darkness. Spock did what Cyborg did while Kirk was transported onto Khan's ship. Oh wow... now that you mention it is kinda the same thing yes. I didn't even notice that when i wrote the script or filmed the scene's It still made for a good episode though. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 20, 2013 9:41:30 GMT -5
Oh wow... now that you mention it is kinda the same thing yes. I didn't even notice that when i wrote the script or filmed the scene's It still made for a good episode though. I'm certainly proud of it When i filmed i was scared it wouldn't be exciting enough but turned out i was wrong. |
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Post by Star on Oct 20, 2013 9:43:48 GMT -5
It still made for a good episode though. I'm certainly proud of it When i filmed i was scared it wouldn't be exciting enough but turned out i was wrong. There wasn't much action (fighting wise) but the episode didn't really need it. It was fine the way you did it. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 20, 2013 9:46:10 GMT -5
I'm certainly proud of it When i filmed i was scared it wouldn't be exciting enough but turned out i was wrong. There wasn't much action (fighting wise) but the episode didn't really need it. It was fine the way you did it. Yeah i was afraid people would notice the lack of action and might not like it. There was more action in the original script though but it was pretty mindless and i figured it would take to long to film and edit. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 24, 2013 13:36:20 GMT -5
Did you like how i incorporated a Teleporter in this episode?
I thought it was a good homage to Star Trek but it also served as a quick gateway to finishing the episode earlier. The teleporter wasn't in the original script at all. Jut like Bogore only had one line in the original script and Fierce had none.
In the original draft they were supposed to use a cloaking deviced ship to board the Keelian Warship but this took me too much time to do and i wanted to give Bogore and Fierce more lines. And so teleporter scene's were born.
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Post by Kenbo on Oct 24, 2013 13:44:47 GMT -5
Did you like how i incorporated a Teleporter in this episode? I thought it was a good homage to Star Trek but it also served as a quick gateway to finishing the episode earlier. The teleporter wasn't in the original script at all. Jut like Bogore only had one line in the original script and Fierce had none. In the original draft they were supposed to use a cloaking deviced ship to board the Keelian Warship but this took me too much time to do and i wanted to give Bogore and Fierce more lines. And so teleporter scene's were born. I think the teleporter was nice? Will we see it in other episodes as well...? |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Oct 24, 2013 14:34:22 GMT -5
Did you like how i incorporated a Teleporter in this episode? I thought it was a good homage to Star Trek but it also served as a quick gateway to finishing the episode earlier. The teleporter wasn't in the original script at all. Jut like Bogore only had one line in the original script and Fierce had none. In the original draft they were supposed to use a cloaking deviced ship to board the Keelian Warship but this took me too much time to do and i wanted to give Bogore and Fierce more lines. And so teleporter scene's were born. Good choice. I like how your using technology that hasn't been seen in Star Wars |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 24, 2013 14:35:38 GMT -5
Did you like how i incorporated a Teleporter in this episode? I thought it was a good homage to Star Trek but it also served as a quick gateway to finishing the episode earlier. The teleporter wasn't in the original script at all. Jut like Bogore only had one line in the original script and Fierce had none. In the original draft they were supposed to use a cloaking deviced ship to board the Keelian Warship but this took me too much time to do and i wanted to give Bogore and Fierce more lines. And so teleporter scene's were born. I think the teleporter was nice? Will we see it in other episodes as well...? You probably won't see it again for a couple of episodes but it might return. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Oct 24, 2013 15:04:39 GMT -5
Did you like how i incorporated a Teleporter in this episode? I thought it was a good homage to Star Trek but it also served as a quick gateway to finishing the episode earlier. The teleporter wasn't in the original script at all. Jut like Bogore only had one line in the original script and Fierce had none. In the original draft they were supposed to use a cloaking deviced ship to board the Keelian Warship but this took me too much time to do and i wanted to give Bogore and Fierce more lines. And so teleporter scene's were born. I like the teleporter. But it kinda makes you wonder why no one used it in ROTI or ROTJK. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Oct 24, 2013 15:28:13 GMT -5
Did you like how i incorporated a Teleporter in this episode? I thought it was a good homage to Star Trek but it also served as a quick gateway to finishing the episode earlier. The teleporter wasn't in the original script at all. Jut like Bogore only had one line in the original script and Fierce had none. In the original draft they were supposed to use a cloaking deviced ship to board the Keelian Warship but this took me too much time to do and i wanted to give Bogore and Fierce more lines. And so teleporter scene's were born. I like the teleporter. But it kinda makes you wonder why no one used it in ROTI or ROTJK. That's why it will return at some point. |
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Post by Potato on Oct 24, 2013 16:16:08 GMT -5
I saw this several days ago but never commented on it. I really liked it and thought it was a pretty good way to start things off, so I'll give it an 8/10. It's always hard to start big things like this, especially because you can have all of this amazing stuff later but you have to start fairly grounded in the beginning. I still thought it was pretty nice and I'll be looking out for more.
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Feb 15, 2014 14:20:52 GMT -5
Here it is!! Sorry for the long wait but i hope it is worth it It has 128 pictures. Episode 2: Into Silver Space, watch it right here! www.flickr.com/photos/100712891@N04/12542953365/Just like last time you are allowed to give a rating after you've seen it
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Feb 15, 2014 15:02:57 GMT -5
Aw yeah, Cyborg gets the big chair again  It was what we'd call in Britain, a real corker of an episode Ivar One touch I liked was the focus on Ravi and Avery's relationship. The pictures were typically brilliant. The camera work was top job, and I adored the planet effects you gave. It really brought some life to it The only remotely negative thing I can say was I sort of wanted a bit more insight on Gerdjon and Vala's closeness. Gerdjon never really bothered to say anything on his son's death. But who am I kidding, this was awesome! The action was massive, but on a balanced level. It felt short, but probably because that's what happens when you enjoy something so much Again, another high scorer 9.0/10. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Feb 15, 2014 15:12:43 GMT -5
Aw yeah, Cyborg gets the big chair again It was what we'd call in Britain, a real corker of an episode Ivar One touch I liked was the focus on Ravi and Avery's relationship. The pictures were typically brilliant. The camera work was top job, and I adored the planet effects you gave. It really brought some life to it The only remotely negative thing I can say was I sort of wanted a bit more insight on Gerdjon and Vala's closeness. Gerdjon never really bothered to say anything on his son's death. But who am I kidding, this was awesome! The action was massive, but on a balanced level. It felt short, but probably because that's what happens when you enjoy something so much Again, another high scorer 9.0/10. Vala isn't dead He got shot in the leg but he didn't die. Short? Well i geuss the pacing is good then because it took really long to put together Thanks for the amazing feedback and the score! |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Feb 15, 2014 15:14:54 GMT -5
Aw yeah, Cyborg gets the big chair again It was what we'd call in Britain, a real corker of an episode Ivar One touch I liked was the focus on Ravi and Avery's relationship. The pictures were typically brilliant. The camera work was top job, and I adored the planet effects you gave. It really brought some life to it The only remotely negative thing I can say was I sort of wanted a bit more insight on Gerdjon and Vala's closeness. Gerdjon never really bothered to say anything on his son's death. But who am I kidding, this was awesome! The action was massive, but on a balanced level. It felt short, but probably because that's what happens when you enjoy something so much Again, another high scorer 9.0/10. Vala isn't dead He got shot in the leg but he didn't die. Short? Well i geuss the pacing is good then because it took really long to put together Thanks for the amazing feedback and the score! Well that's given me something to think over what'll happen to him later Do you know when the next episode will be up? |
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The Star Trek references were perfectly dotted around and the scenes involving the ships were fun to watch. Writing was spot on and I especially liked the part where Cyborg gets the chair 
. 9/10 is my rating for the first episode and I am looking forward to what more the series has to offer.
) but did the whole second leader occur in Into Darkness? I know it has in TOS. And the fact that it introduced the main characters and setting was good for a premiere. 
It was what we'd call in Britain, a real corker of an episode Ivar 
