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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Dec 27, 2014 12:40:59 GMT -5
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Dec 27, 2014 13:18:47 GMT -5
Looking forward to it
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Post by Spidyyr on Dec 27, 2014 13:58:34 GMT -5
Here's the thread to my new story. Here you can comment, discuss and analyse this idea. Chapters will be posted on a weekly basis (hopefully  ) and will likely be the first active "series" of the new year. I'll be posting the link here soon, so please have fun reading and if you have any criticism I would more than welcome it  Sweet! |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Dec 27, 2014 16:34:42 GMT -5
First chapter is now up and running |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Dec 27, 2014 17:41:22 GMT -5
I've got time. I'll go read it This is the one I've been anticipating  |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Dec 27, 2014 18:18:00 GMT -5
I loved it Mav ! For the first chapter it was well written, detailed, and fast paced. I like the not so long, and not so short versions of the series because I normally don't have the time to read them. But I really liked the direction that you are going in and TOR is a great setting and time for this. I can't wait for Chapter 2! *And I'm not sure if you care or not it didn't affect the enjoyment of the first chapter but I just noticed a few grammatical/spelling mistakes like you put 'your' instead of 'you'. |
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Post by Kenbo on Dec 27, 2014 20:44:37 GMT -5
Was the opening crawl supposed to be like the crawl at the beginning of the SW movies because I totally imagined it like that But that was a good chapter, Mav. Carletta seems like an interesting character and having a female protagonist is a nice change. Definitely excited to read the rest |
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Post by Star on Dec 27, 2014 22:31:36 GMT -5
Nice opening to the series, Mav. This is the idea you had for the group series, isn't it? It looks like it'll be a cool story. Any idea how many chapters there will be? Or are you just writing it as you go? |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Dec 28, 2014 2:53:09 GMT -5
I loved it Mav ! For the first chapter it was well written, detailed, and fast paced. I like the not so long, and not so short versions of the series because I normally don't have the time to read them. But I really liked the direction that you are going in and TOR is a great setting and time for this. I can't wait for Chapter 2! *And I'm not sure if you care or not it didn't affect the enjoyment of the first chapter but I just noticed a few grammatical/spelling mistakes like you put 'your' instead of 'you'. Thanks very much CBK And thanks for the heads up. I'll have to edit that a little |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Dec 28, 2014 2:56:04 GMT -5
Was the opening crawl supposed to be like the crawl at the beginning of the SW movies because I totally imagined it like that But that was a good chapter, Mav. Carletta seems like an interesting character and having a female protagonist is a nice change. Definitely excited to read the rest Yeah, that was the intention. Glad you got that bit Nice opening to the series, Mav. This is the idea you had for the group series, isn't it? It looks like it'll be a cool story. Any idea how many chapters there will be? Or are you just writing it as you go? Yep. It was going to be a story arc, but it didn't work out. Not sure how many chapters there will be, but it'll be less than twenty I can definitely say. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Dec 28, 2014 3:26:13 GMT -5
Does anyone know how I can update my story? I've edited it on the doc manager, but I can't seem to go beyond that.
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Dec 28, 2014 9:24:25 GMT -5
Does anyone know how I can update my story? I've edited it on the doc manager, but I can't seem to go beyond that. I used to know how but this is from someone else see if it works. Click 'Sign in' (and sign in if you need to) Go to 'Publish' then 'Document Manager (Upload)' Then EITHER click 'Edit/Preview' if the document is still there and make the amendments (making sure to click 'save' when you're done) OR if the document is not there change the story in word/works/notepad/etc and upload it again or just upload it and change as above. Next, go to 'Publish' > 'My Stories' Then click 'edit' on the story you want to change. Then click 'Content/Chapters' And use the bottom box to 'Replace/Update Chapter with new Content' Select the chapter you want to change in the first box and the new or newly changed document in the second box. Then just click 'Replace Chapter' and you're done! |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Dec 28, 2014 9:54:12 GMT -5
Does anyone know how I can update my story? I've edited it on the doc manager, but I can't seem to go beyond that. I used to know how but this is from someone else see if it works. Click 'Sign in' (and sign in if you need to) Go to 'Publish' then 'Document Manager (Upload)' Then EITHER click 'Edit/Preview' if the document is still there and make the amendments (making sure to click 'save' when you're done) OR if the document is not there change the story in word/works/notepad/etc and upload it again or just upload it and change as above. Next, go to 'Publish' > 'My Stories' Then click 'edit' on the story you want to change. Then click 'Content/Chapters' And use the bottom box to 'Replace/Update Chapter with new Content' Select the chapter you want to change in the first box and the new or newly changed document in the second box. Then just click 'Replace Chapter' and you're done! Thanks very much for the help, I think I've sorted it now |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Dec 28, 2014 10:00:39 GMT -5
I used to know how but this is from someone else see if it works. Click 'Sign in' (and sign in if you need to) Go to 'Publish' then 'Document Manager (Upload)' Then EITHER click 'Edit/Preview' if the document is still there and make the amendments (making sure to click 'save' when you're done) OR if the document is not there change the story in word/works/notepad/etc and upload it again or just upload it and change as above. Next, go to 'Publish' > 'My Stories' Then click 'edit' on the story you want to change. Then click 'Content/Chapters' And use the bottom box to 'Replace/Update Chapter with new Content' Select the chapter you want to change in the first box and the new or newly changed document in the second box. Then just click 'Replace Chapter' and you're done! Thanks very much for the help, I think I've sorted it now Ahaha no problem, glad you got it to work out. |
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Post by Star on Dec 28, 2014 16:27:20 GMT -5
Was the opening crawl supposed to be like the crawl at the beginning of the SW movies because I totally imagined it like that But that was a good chapter, Mav. Carletta seems like an interesting character and having a female protagonist is a nice change. Definitely excited to read the rest Yeah, that was the intention. Glad you got that bit Nice opening to the series, Mav. This is the idea you had for the group series, isn't it? It looks like it'll be a cool story. Any idea how many chapters there will be? Or are you just writing it as you go? Yep. It was going to be a story arc, but it didn't work out. Not sure how many chapters there will be, but it'll be less than twenty I can definitely say. Sounds awesome. And I know it's probably way too early to tell, but is this going to be a standalone series/story, or do you have plans for anything else related to this? |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Dec 29, 2014 2:46:02 GMT -5
Yeah, that was the intention. Glad you got that bit Yep. It was going to be a story arc, but it didn't work out. Not sure how many chapters there will be, but it'll be less than twenty I can definitely say. Sounds awesome. And I know it's probably way too early to tell, but is this going to be a standalone series/story, or do you have plans for anything else related to this? For now, this is going to be a one off story. However I may change my mind which is something I do a lot of |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Dec 30, 2014 8:08:48 GMT -5
Strong opening Maverick. I could picture everything perfectly in my head as if it was a film  Btw, Fun-fact: Kaas is the Dutch word for Cheese so i snickered a little bit at Kaas City Sorry. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Dec 30, 2014 9:48:19 GMT -5
Strong opening Maverick. I could picture everything perfectly in my head as if it was a film Btw, Fun-fact: Kaas is the Dutch word for Cheese so i snickered a little bit at Kaas City Sorry. Yeah, I know. Truth is, Kaas City was created for the game TOR, not by me. If this were a more comedic story, I'd be tempted to take the name literally |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Dec 30, 2014 10:58:28 GMT -5
Strong opening Maverick. I could picture everything perfectly in my head as if it was a film Btw, Fun-fact: Kaas is the Dutch word for Cheese so i snickered a little bit at Kaas City Sorry. Yeah, I know. Truth is, Kaas City was created for the game TOR, not by me. If this were a more comedic story, I'd be tempted to take the name literally I knew i heard it before. |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Jan 2, 2015 10:07:13 GMT -5
When's the next chapter going to be up? I'm quite pumped for Chapter 2 |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jan 2, 2015 10:24:00 GMT -5
When's the next chapter going to be up? I'm quite pumped for Chapter 2 Tomorrow on Saturday. Happy to see this is gaining so much anticipation |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jan 3, 2015 8:08:05 GMT -5
Second chapter is up. I'm actually quite happy how this one turned out. |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Jan 3, 2015 10:00:58 GMT -5
YAY! I'll go read it now.
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Jan 3, 2015 10:31:30 GMT -5
Another great chapter Mav! I'm assuming Lasc and Gyb will be main characters in the upcoming chapters? Or were they just one time men. I do like Darth Lasc, he isn't your typical wicked Sith. But this will be one heck of a story that I can't wait for. Good job! |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jan 3, 2015 10:35:14 GMT -5
Another great chapter Mav! I'm assuming Lasc and Gyb will be main characters in the upcoming chapters? Or were they just one time men. I do like Darth Lasc, he isn't your typical wicked Sith. But this will be one heck of a story that I can't wait for. Good job! I'm tempted to make them appear some more, but I'm afraid that's all we'll be seeing of them in the spotlight. It's annoying, since I like writing about them and I can't find a way of fitting them back in the story. |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Jan 3, 2015 10:37:46 GMT -5
Another great chapter Mav! I'm assuming Lasc and Gyb will be main characters in the upcoming chapters? Or were they just one time men. I do like Darth Lasc, he isn't your typical wicked Sith. But this will be one heck of a story that I can't wait for. Good job! I'm tempted to make them appear some more, but I'm afraid that's all we'll be seeing of them in the spotlight. It's annoying, since I like writing about them and I can't find a way of fitting them back in the story. Ah I see. Maybe they could have a little cameo |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jan 3, 2015 10:41:02 GMT -5
I'm tempted to make them appear some more, but I'm afraid that's all we'll be seeing of them in the spotlight. It's annoying, since I like writing about them and I can't find a way of fitting them back in the story. Ah I see. Maybe they could have a little cameo Maybe I can handle something like that. I might actually make a short story about after I'm done with HC. I guess I just really like their bad cop/sorta more humorous bad cop dynamic |
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Post by Kenbo on Jan 3, 2015 10:55:24 GMT -5
Another good chapter I liked Darth Lasc's character |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jan 3, 2015 12:33:17 GMT -5
I read Chapter 1. Really cool idea and set up. The only thing is her mother seems on death's door and this plan seems like it might take a while. |
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Post by Newan on Jan 3, 2015 12:51:57 GMT -5
I just read both chapters both good stories and your writing is expertly done. Yeah I remmeber this was a story you had for the group series awhile back for TOR timeline and stuff. Well cool to see you're still going through with it. All the characters are good but I think the empire is a bit too nice especially Lasc. Thsts just my observation. Also you may want to delete chapter 2 off of chapter 1 since you kinda have them twice. |
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