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Post by Scruffy the Clone (Scruffy) on Apr 19, 2013 9:25:24 GMT -5
In the fan fictions topic (It might have been in the old general board, but it won't hurt to check the new one), I mentioned several fanfic ideas I had. One was a jedi of a species with an incredibly long lifespan. Well, here it goes. Don't expect it to be finished.  Chaptah Onez - Teh Part Onez: Jamags argues with Scruffy and a ship chases another ship
Hi. I'm Jamags. You're reading my story. Now, the question that always comes at the beginning of first-person narratives: Where should I start? You'll find the beginning rather boring, so I'll just sort of skip through it. Outer rim planet blah blah blah bouncing blue-eyed babie blah blah blah boy blah blah blah force sensitive blah blah blah jedi. Oh, and he's from a species, near-human in appearence, that can live thousands of years. Yeah. I buried the lead. So sue me.
3,999 BBY: A jedi star ship en route from Coruscant to a mid rim agricultural world.
Ooh... Now it's like a log or something. What's that I hear? You want me to get on with the story? Well so do I.Uhh... Jamags? Yeah? Just let me do it. Okay... The ship cruised through space persued by a larger battleship. A youngling- That's me!  Jamags? Yeah? Shut up. |
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Post by Scruffy the Clone (Scruffy) on Apr 22, 2013 8:56:30 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Part 2 - I finally got Jamags to stop talking!Or did you? Dun dun dun... Shut up. The pursuers' ship fired an experimental ion cannon, temporarily disabling the other ship. Its crew prepared to board. On the other ship, a Jedi vessel taking younglings to Taris for training, several Jedi Masters, Knights, and Padawans rushed to the air lock to fight the boarders: Mandalorians. A group of about twelve younglings came to help. One of the masters turned to a hooded Padawan. "You get the Younglings to safety." AUTHOR'S NOTE: The hooded padawan was originally going to be Revan, but I did some more research and found out the dates are all wrong. So now it's just a random padawan. "But I can help!" "Yes. And you can do it by getting them to safety." "Fine." They ran down the corridor and accross the ship. They heard the sounds of battle behind them, but not close. They entered one of the training rooms. The padawans holocommunicator beeped. "Yes master?" "The Mandalorians launched more boarding craft be on your -" The transmission was cut off. Something crashed through the wall. Aaand... I just now remembered I was writing this and I don't have time to write more, so... Yeah.
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Post by Whitespine on Apr 22, 2013 9:18:22 GMT -5
Very good, Scruffy. I may start writing my own fan fiction today. I'm sick today, so I have the time.
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Post by Scruffy the Clone (Scruffy) on Apr 22, 2013 12:04:25 GMT -5
Very good, Scruffy. I may start writing my own fan fiction today. I'm sick today, so I have the time. Cool! |
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Post by Kenbo on Apr 22, 2013 13:50:21 GMT -5
I like it, Scruffy. Funny..  Can't wait to see more! |
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Post by Scruffy the Clone (Scruffy) on Apr 23, 2013 9:24:58 GMT -5
I like it, Scruffy. Funny.. Can't wait to see more! Thanks! |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 23, 2013 18:38:55 GMT -5
 I like it a lot, Scruffy! |
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Post by Scruffy the Clone (Scruffy) on Apr 24, 2013 7:13:56 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Part 3 - Jamags Kicks Butt! ...
The Padawan drew his lightsaber. The large object, now embedded in the wall, began to split apart, making a hole for it's passengers, another boarding party. One of the younglings had been injured already. One of the Mandalorians jumped out and fired several shots at the padawan. He deflected the shots and leaped forward. Shouting at the younglings to stay back. He sliced upen the Mandalorian's blaster and kicked him away. He jumped into the boarding craft. One of the Mandalorians fired a flamethrower. The padawan dodged. The two Mandalorians tackled him to the ground, but he force-pushed them into the ceiling. One of the Mandos inside the boarding craft fired a rocket launcher. He force-pushed the rocket back into the craft. Two Mandos jumped out before the explosion. Another was thrown out by it. Two more were injured and three were killed. The five Mandalorians still able to fight readied their weapons. The padawan force-pushed them into the wall and deflected their blaster shots. One flew at him with a jetpack and tried to stab him with a vibro blade. He decapitated him, but was shot in the leg while doing so. He threw his lightsaber into another one's throught, and pulled it back. The one that had come out first fired his flamethrower. The padawan ducked and force-pulled the Mando to him, slicing the flamethrower off and knocking him out. The last two diverolled on either side of him and began shooting at him. He deflected a shot into one, but the other got him through the chest. The padawan fell dead. The Mandalorian turned to the younglings. Most of them cowered in fear. Jamags walked forward and extended his hand. The Mandalorian stopped to see what he was doing. A fatal mistake. The Padawan's lightsaber flew straight through his chest and into Jamags' hand. Aw Yeah! I'm awesome! Shut up.
"There'll be more coming. I don't think we can take them. We'll have to make a break for the escape pod."
With that, the younglings ran.
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Post by Star on Apr 25, 2013 17:44:12 GMT -5
I like it so far, Scruffy! It's also funny. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Sept 1, 2014 14:49:11 GMT -5
well I've never seen this thread before...
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Sept 1, 2014 14:54:20 GMT -5
well I've never seen this thread before... I don't think I have either Guess this is also part of the creative graveyard |
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Post by Star on Sept 1, 2014 21:27:36 GMT -5
Well what have we here?
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Jamags? Yeah? Shut up.
Can't wait to see more!
it’s been quite a while. I’ve been pretty good, how about yourself? 