Rule of the Kestrels

Ah, you picked up on that

Minor Leagues was good and I liked the interactions between Adrian and Jett. And I noticed the Jett Kron thing as well. I think I liked Tecumseh a little more but this one was still good and it seems to be setting up the structure of how most of the episodes will be.

Episode 2 Trivia:
-Just like in the last episode, the names of the minor characters were people Spider knows in real life.
-As some people noticed, the names off the bounty hunters "Jett" and "Kron" were named after the SW.com user and one-time AG player "Jett-Kron"
-Jett originally had a different name that you could see on the wiki in revisions i guess. I changed the story so his real name is revealed later.
-Rollins wasn't in this episodes originally, I add him in so you would know where Adrian got his equipment from.
-In the original story, Jett didn't recognize Adrian at all from the last episode.
-The fight between Jett and Adrian was just going to be Jett calling Adrian "Kron" and Adrian insisting he wasn't. But then I realized Adrian's killing of Lia kinda resembled the crime Kron was wanted for, adding another layer of misunderstanding and showing that Adrian and Kron really aren't that different.
-In the episode, the crystal is hinted have some sort of value beyond being a crystal. This was added in editing as the crystal was first meant to just be just a valuable crystal that maybe had some sentimental value.
-I kinda knew this episode wouldn't be as well received as the last one, as it kinda slowed down and had three less bloody massacres (Only two people died). But I'm okay with that as the most important thing I had to get right in this one was introducing Jett and having him interact with Adrian.
-Oh yeah, Eileen was barely in this episode. I thought about giving her a subplot but I couldn't really think of one and nothing really interesting is happening to her. (yet!)
-Jett will basically become a main character after this. At the end, Adrian lets a bounty 20,000 go to save Jett's life so yeah they're kinda friends now.
-Jett was meant to be the opposite of what you'd expect from a new bounty hunter who's first line is "Freeze, douchebag!" He's actually a pretty decent dude when compared to Adrian. But I'll say now, there's more to him than meets the eye.
-I thought about adding something at the end to extend the pic count a bit. I considered maybe a scene showing Marius and Hannibal but I decided this episode shouldn't really involve that. And I wanted to end the episode with the line "My Name is Adrian Kestrel."

Pretty sweet episode. Nice little Jett Kron reference and I liked how the story always kept a quick pace. Also I think Jett seems like a really cool character, so I think I'll enjoy more of him. For the score, I think 8.4/10 is best. Good episode, but I think the last one had more an edge.

Yeah, I thought about choosing a character from something I've created, but IDK if I actually want to do that.

Yeah, I'm gonna try to get every character at least a page. And thanks, it's the same one I used for Castiel.

I'm typing as fast as I can!!!

Well you have to type the script first and then copy and paste it... so I don't really see an advantage.

Tell me what you think, and feel free to leave comments on Flickr. And please leave a rating out of 10.

What do you guys think about the characters so far?

Well uh yeah... trivia

Oh yeah, and Jett originally stabbed the bartender. I realized this made no sense and deleting the was worth various plot holes such as: Whay happened to Jett's knife? Where did the bartender go?

That was an interesting one. I'm not sure if you meant it, but the story somewhat has parallels to the first episode. I'd probably give it a 7.9/10. I don't think this is going to be my favourite, but it was a good story nonetheless.