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Post by Newan on May 24, 2014 2:40:35 GMT -5
I think the story should be renamed to "The Adventures of Newan (and the other guys)" jk but good chapter  |
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Post by bane on May 24, 2014 3:48:35 GMT -5
I think the story should be renamed to "The Adventures of Newan (and the other guys)" jk but good chapter Speaking of that, when did you join starwars.com Newan? I remember you there on day, saying that you'd come back but that you'd been there before. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on May 24, 2014 10:17:58 GMT -5
Maverick Marshalls was so much better then Paranormal Activity  I wouldn't know. I haven't watched Paranormal Activity  |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on May 24, 2014 10:19:58 GMT -5
Maverick Marshalls was so much better then Paranormal Activity I wouldn't know. I haven't watched Paranormal Activity I only saw the first 10 minutes  But Maverick Marshalls has a great story that easily fits in some of the best of AG's. It is defenitely better than Rise I and possibly II. (Not saying III because that's ma baby ) |
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Post by Newan on May 24, 2014 10:20:32 GMT -5
I think the story should be renamed to "The Adventures of Newan (and the other guys)" jk but good chapter Speaking of that, when did you join starwars.com Newan? I remember you there on day, saying that you'd come back but that you'd been there before. Oh it was a long time ago... Actually I made an account on Star Wars.com before the clone wars even began but I never commented till January Season 4. Which would be like 2011 I think. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on May 24, 2014 10:24:32 GMT -5
I wouldn't know. I haven't watched Paranormal Activity I only saw the first 10 minutes But Maverick Marshalls has a great story that easily fits in some of the best of AG's. It is defenitely better than Rise I and possibly II. (Not saying III because that's ma baby ) That bad huh? But goodness, I couldn't compare it to Rise III. Not by a long shot! Besides that had build up and structure, while Marshalls was just my first game and was more of an intro to things. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on May 24, 2014 10:28:01 GMT -5
I only saw the first 10 minutes But Maverick Marshalls has a great story that easily fits in some of the best of AG's. It is defenitely better than Rise I and possibly II. (Not saying III because that's ma baby ) That bad huh? But goodness, I couldn't compare it to Rise III. Not by a long shot! Besides that had build up and structure, while Marshalls was just my first game and was more of an intro to things. Same as Rise. Saboteurs was just a set-up and introduction like every good firt part should be. After that comes the build up for future installments. When i look back at Rise i now see that How To Train Your Dragon/Kung Fu Panda was a great inspiration for it because at that time i knew it was going to be a trilogy and that every installment was going to build on the other one with time-lapses and such. Kinda funny how i can compare my trilogy to two trilogies that aren't even out that. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on May 24, 2014 10:33:39 GMT -5
That bad huh? But goodness, I couldn't compare it to Rise III. Not by a long shot! Besides that had build up and structure, while Marshalls was just my first game and was more of an intro to things. Same as Rise. Saboteurs was just a set-up and introduction like every good firt part should be. After that comes the build up for future installments. When i look back at Rise i now see that How To Train Your Dragon/Kung Fu Panda was a great inspiration for it because at that time i knew it was going to be a trilogy and that every installment was going to build on the other one with time-lapses and such. Kinda funny how i can compare my trilogy to two trilogies that aren't even out that. A bit ironic I suppose. You make a trilogy that was partially inspired by a couple of trilogies that aren't completed, with one not even having a second instalment released yet But I think that if I make a sequel to Marshalls, the time jump will be of a smaller scale. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on May 24, 2014 10:47:43 GMT -5
Same as Rise. Saboteurs was just a set-up and introduction like every good firt part should be. After that comes the build up for future installments. When i look back at Rise i now see that How To Train Your Dragon/Kung Fu Panda was a great inspiration for it because at that time i knew it was going to be a trilogy and that every installment was going to build on the other one with time-lapses and such. Kinda funny how i can compare my trilogy to two trilogies that aren't even out that. A bit ironic I suppose. You make a trilogy that was partially inspired by a couple of trilogies that aren't completed, with one not even having a second instalment released yet But I think that if I make a sequel to Marshalls, the time jump will be of a smaller scale. The jump from Saboteurs to Infiltrators is not that large (that's why Redemption fits in there nicely) but i always planned a huge jump from Infiltrators to Jedi Knight to higher the stakes and drama. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on May 24, 2014 11:46:07 GMT -5
A bit ironic I suppose. You make a trilogy that was partially inspired by a couple of trilogies that aren't completed, with one not even having a second instalment released yet But I think that if I make a sequel to Marshalls, the time jump will be of a smaller scale. The jump from Saboteurs to Infiltrators is not that large (that's why Redemption fits in there nicely) but i always planned a huge jump from Infiltrators to Jedi Knight to higher the stakes and drama. Good choice really, since it can show some big changes. |
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Post by Pinda on May 24, 2014 11:51:33 GMT -5
Speaking of that, when did you join starwars.com Newan? I remember you there on day, saying that you'd come back but that you'd been there before. Oh it was a long time ago... Actually I made an account on Star Wars.com before the clone wars even began but I never commented till January Season 4. Which would be like 2011 I think. Season 4 was 2011-2012 so you must have joined in 2012. |
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Post by Pinda on May 24, 2014 11:52:22 GMT -5
Another good chapter. It will be fun to read all of this in a few years from now. |
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Post by Newan on May 24, 2014 14:17:32 GMT -5
Oh it was a long time ago... Actually I made an account on Star Wars.com before the clone wars even began but I never commented till January Season 4. Which would be like 2011 I think. Season 4 was 2011-2012 so you must have joined in 2012. I joined long before 2012 but that would have been when I started commenting. |
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Post by bane on May 24, 2014 16:37:46 GMT -5
Speaking of that, when did you join starwars.com Newan? I remember you there on day, saying that you'd come back but that you'd been there before. Oh it was a long time ago... Actually I made an account on Star Wars.com before the clone wars even began but I never commented till January Season 4. Which would be like 2011 I think. Ah. I see. |
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Post by Malgus on May 25, 2014 19:27:19 GMT -5
I liked the new chapter. Sorry I haven't said how good this story (or narrative?) is but here I am and it's great Mav. |
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Post by red on May 25, 2014 19:36:00 GMT -5
Just read the new chapter! Mav you are really a great writer. I could never make anything like this without making it sound really forced (tee hee, forced. ) and cheesy. Liked the newest installment. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on May 31, 2014 1:09:10 GMT -5
Would it be possible if someone with better knowledge explain me something? How did Jodo's mod hating begin? Sorry, but my memory's not being compliant at the moment |
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Post by Newan on May 31, 2014 1:44:39 GMT -5
Would it be possible if someone with better knowledge explain me something? How did Jodo's mod hating begin? Sorry, but my memory's not being compliant at the moment By us calling him out as a obvious troll a little while after we made this site. He appeared in SW.com asking people to join this site and at the same time a troll happended to appear and he used that to his "advantage" to prove a point. Quite obvious is was him though by the amount of time between comments. And then we went in a PM and he denied if. He also swore a lot and stuff. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on May 31, 2014 10:14:04 GMT -5
Would it be possible if someone with better knowledge explain me something? How did Jodo's mod hating begin? Sorry, but my memory's not being compliant at the moment By us calling him out as a obvious troll a little while after we made this site. He appeared in SW.com asking people to join this site and at the same time a troll happended to appear and he used that to his "advantage" to prove a point. Quite obvious is was him though by the amount of time between comments. And then we went in a PM and he denied if. He also swore a lot and stuff. I'm guessing that was when you guys made that little sting operation? Anyway thanks for clearing that up. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jun 4, 2014 1:20:34 GMT -5
I don't mean to open up old wounds, but I wondered if I may ask how the whole Jodo "rebellion" started back in April.
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Post by Newan on Jun 4, 2014 2:13:16 GMT -5
I don't mean to open up old wounds, but I wondered if I may ask how the whole Jodo "rebellion" started back in April. Read the PMs I forwarded to everyone. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jun 4, 2014 2:53:27 GMT -5
I don't mean to open up old wounds, but I wondered if I may ask how the whole Jodo "rebellion" started back in April. Read the PMs I forwarded to everyone. OK, I think I got what I needed from them |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jun 7, 2014 1:30:06 GMT -5
Well guys, it's all done and dusted. Chapter 6 is up. Thanks for all the support over the project, it's been real fun writing. Enjoy |
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Post by Newan on Jun 7, 2014 1:46:26 GMT -5
Good chapter Mav nice story of everything...'though I would have Prefered better spacing in paragraphs |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jun 7, 2014 2:43:33 GMT -5
Good chapter Mav nice story of everything...'though I would have Prefered better spacing in paragraphs Yeah, I have to admit I could have done better with that. I'm more used to just typing things up as raw text without paragraphs, but as you can see I'm trying to break that habit |
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Post by Malgus on Jun 7, 2014 12:20:20 GMT -5
What's this about Unlimited having a sketchy past.... I either don't remember details it having been more than a year ago, or I just never knew....
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Post by red on Jun 7, 2014 12:29:06 GMT -5
Wow. That was really good man. Thank you. |
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Post by Pinda on Jun 7, 2014 12:34:29 GMT -5
What's this about Unlimited having a sketchy past.... I either don't remember details it having been more than a year ago, or I just never knew.... Well, I only learned about his sketchy past after he left... It's very likely you never knew. Anyway, great job Maverick! |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Jun 15, 2014 12:09:49 GMT -5
Thank you Maverick And i will not forget to thank you aswell, for you deserve it. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 15, 2014 12:36:45 GMT -5
Great job Mav, I hope there will be many more chapters to come in the future.  |
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