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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 12, 2014 15:24:12 GMT -5
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Post by Kenbo on Mar 12, 2014 15:28:16 GMT -5
I had some plot ideas for future series not necessarily Star Wars because Underworld's starting to get boring but I think they would be too much like the flashbacks from Arrow or what I think Transformers 4 will be about.......
Also now that I think about it I don't think I have the right minifigure parts to pull it off at least not if it isn't Star Wars or something Sci-Fi..
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Mar 12, 2014 15:38:41 GMT -5
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Post by Spidyyr on Mar 12, 2014 15:38:41 GMT -5
I had some plot ideas for future series not necessarily Star Wars because Underworld's starting to get boring but I think they would be too much like the flashbacks from Arrow or what I think Transformers 4 will be about....... Also now that I think about it I don't think I have the right minifigure parts to pull it off at least not if it isn't Star Wars or something Sci-Fi.. I like Underworld... Just try to throw some twists in there sometimes, not like new characters, but with the main ones. Like you need some internal struggles or something to raise the stakes. |
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Post by Kenbo on Mar 12, 2014 15:38:54 GMT -5
Actually it's possible Underworld will be on hiatus so I can work on something else...
Oh yeah and Exiles... I might just cancel it I mean I could do some cool things with it but it's too much effort and I would rather do something new..
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Post by Kenbo on Mar 12, 2014 15:41:07 GMT -5
I had some plot ideas for future series not necessarily Star Wars because Underworld's starting to get boring but I think they would be too much like the flashbacks from Arrow or what I think Transformers 4 will be about....... Also now that I think about it I don't think I have the right minifigure parts to pull it off at least not if it isn't Star Wars or something Sci-Fi.. I like Underworld... Just try to throw some twists in there sometimes, not like new characters, but with the main ones. Like you need some internal struggles or something to raise the stakes. Lol thanks and actually I'm planning for Season 3 to have more complex stories and internal struggles like you said  |
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Post by Spidyyr on Mar 12, 2014 15:45:20 GMT -5
I like Underworld... Just try to throw some twists in there sometimes, not like new characters, but with the main ones. Like you need some internal struggles or something to raise the stakes. Lol thanks and actually I'm planning for Season 3 to have more complex stories and internal struggles like you said Like Season 2 wasn't bad but it sorta felt the same as Season 1. Like it just needs to build more. Just try to throw in some challenges for Venick and Ciro that aren't just killing people. Maybe test their friendship somehow. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 12, 2014 16:07:41 GMT -5
I had some plot ideas for future series not necessarily Star Wars because Underworld's starting to get boring but I think they would be too much like the flashbacks from Arrow or what I think Transformers 4 will be about....... Also now that I think about it I don't think I have the right minifigure parts to pull it off at least not if it isn't Star Wars or something Sci-Fi.. I like Underworld... Just try to throw some twists in there sometimes, not like new characters, but with the main ones. Like you need some internal struggles or something to raise the stakes. Something that trouble ROTR a bit in my opinion since we know the entire main cast comes out okay and some eventually portray Ravi in Infiltrators (This will be played up throughout the show) but there aren't really stakes, only character development. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 12, 2014 16:08:16 GMT -5
Lol thanks and actually I'm planning for Season 3 to have more complex stories and internal struggles like you said Like Season 2 wasn't bad but it sorta felt the same as Season 1. Like it just needs to build more. Just try to throw in some challenges for Venick and Ciro that aren't just killing people. Maybe test their friendship somehow. Or a huge twist where one dies perhaps. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Mar 12, 2014 16:09:06 GMT -5
I like Underworld... Just try to throw some twists in there sometimes, not like new characters, but with the main ones. Like you need some internal struggles or something to raise the stakes. Something that trouble ROTR a bit in my opinion since we know the entire main cast comes out okay and some eventually portray Ravi in Infiltrators (This will be played up throughout the show) but there aren't really stakes, only character development. You can introduce new characters though. Do it like TCW did it. |
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Mar 12, 2014 16:09:29 GMT -5
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Post by Spidyyr on Mar 12, 2014 16:09:29 GMT -5
Like Season 2 wasn't bad but it sorta felt the same as Season 1. Like it just needs to build more. Just try to throw in some challenges for Venick and Ciro that aren't just killing people. Maybe test their friendship somehow. Or a huge twist where one dies perhaps. Well yeah. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 12, 2014 16:12:59 GMT -5
Something that trouble ROTR a bit in my opinion since we know the entire main cast comes out okay and some eventually portray Ravi in Infiltrators (This will be played up throughout the show) but there aren't really stakes, only character development. You can introduce new characters though. Do it like TCW did it. Don't worry, they are on their way. One has already been revealed. |
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Post by Star on Mar 12, 2014 16:42:54 GMT -5
The Ruthless Mercenaries: A series that focuses on action more than anything else. There are stakes and some twists and lots of death, but that's pretty much it. The story isn't the best IMO, but it's at least sufficient. But if I do another series (which I might) then that series will have a much better story and overall meaning. The Ruthless Merceanries has no overall meaning besides bounty hunters and action. Or well... the way the finale will ends may make it have somewhat of a point... But nothing huge. Lol, yeah, that about sums it up in a sentence or two. |
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Post by Kenbo on Mar 12, 2014 16:47:07 GMT -5
The Ruthless Mercenaries: A series that focuses on action more than anything else. There are stakes and some twists and lots of death, but that's pretty much it. The story isn't the best IMO, but it's at least sufficient. But if I do another series (which I might) then that series will have a much better story and overall meaning. The Ruthless Merceanries has no overall meaning besides bounty hunters and action. Or well... the way the finale will ends may make it have somewhat of a point... But nothing huge. Lol, yeah, that about sums it up in a sentence or two. Lol most of my episodes eventually break out in a random fight as well... However I've kept my episodes kind of short not necessarily intentionally... But I think if people don't like the story, they don't have to click through that many pictures... Not that long episodes are bad it depends on the viewer's taste.. I might make my episodes longer actually so more stuff can happen.. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 12, 2014 16:48:14 GMT -5
The Ruthless Mercenaries: A series that focuses on action more than anything else. There are stakes and some twists and lots of death, but that's pretty much it. The story isn't the best IMO, but it's at least sufficient. But if I do another series (which I might) then that series will have a much better story and overall meaning. The Ruthless Merceanries has no overall meaning besides bounty hunters and action. Or well... the way the finale will ends may make it have somewhat of a point... But nothing huge. Lol, yeah, that about sums it up in a sentence or two. Come on man, little more confident  I think i'll do one like this for ROTR too. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 12, 2014 16:52:33 GMT -5
Rise of The Redemption (Or ROTR for short): A Series about the time period between "Rise of The Saboteurs" and "Rise of The Infiltrators" that explores different angles from wich Ravi and his friends that crew the star cruiser dubbed: "The Redemption" take on their trails, challenges and adventures in the Galaxy Far Far Away.
See how all loose ends are tied, how secrets and things unknown are revealed and how important character development lets yoou look at "Infiltrators" in a whole other light. See how everything let up to the epic story that was featured in the game and how this particular crew of all sorts of misfits become heroes and will do anything they can to bring redemption to a Galaxy at war!
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Mar 12, 2014 16:55:02 GMT -5
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Post by Spidyyr on Mar 12, 2014 16:55:02 GMT -5
I can't really put Resolute on my resume since it was an adapted screenplay.
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Mar 12, 2014 16:56:07 GMT -5
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Post by Star on Mar 12, 2014 16:56:07 GMT -5
The Ruthless Mercenaries: A series that focuses on action more than anything else. There are stakes and some twists and lots of death, but that's pretty much it. The story isn't the best IMO, but it's at least sufficient. But if I do another series (which I might) then that series will have a much better story and overall meaning. The Ruthless Merceanries has no overall meaning besides bounty hunters and action. Or well... the way the finale will ends may make it have somewhat of a point... But nothing huge. Lol, yeah, that about sums it up in a sentence or two. Lol most of my episodes eventually break out in a random fight as well... However I've kept my episodes kind of short not necessarily intentionally... But I think if people don't like the story, they don't have to click through that many pictures... Not that long episodes are bad it depends on the viewer's taste.. I might make my episodes longer actually so more stuff can happen.. Part of the reason my episodes are longer is becuase I write a script. If I just took pics and added text later, I can guarantee you my episodes wouldn't reach over 120 pics. And... That's why I'm delaying the finale... It'll have the most pictures in the whole series (so over 221 pics) and I still need to add the finishing touches on the script. And the way the episode is, 50 of the pics will take awhile to set up and take becuase of what's happening. |
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Mar 12, 2014 16:57:42 GMT -5
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Post by Star on Mar 12, 2014 16:57:42 GMT -5
The Ruthless Mercenaries: A series that focuses on action more than anything else. There are stakes and some twists and lots of death, but that's pretty much it. The story isn't the best IMO, but it's at least sufficient. But if I do another series (which I might) then that series will have a much better story and overall meaning. The Ruthless Merceanries has no overall meaning besides bounty hunters and action. Or well... the way the finale will ends may make it have somewhat of a point... But nothing huge. Lol, yeah, that about sums it up in a sentence or two. Come on man, little more confident I think i'll do one like this for ROTR too. Well, I like my series, but I don't think it's anything spectacular. And lol, I didn't mean for this to be a thing to catch on. I was just trying to be humorous. |
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Post by Kenbo on Mar 12, 2014 17:03:08 GMT -5
Lol most of my episodes eventually break out in a random fight as well... However I've kept my episodes kind of short not necessarily intentionally... But I think if people don't like the story, they don't have to click through that many pictures... Not that long episodes are bad it depends on the viewer's taste.. I might make my episodes longer actually so more stuff can happen.. Part of the reason my episodes are longer is becuase I write a script. If I just took pics and added text later, I can guarantee you my episodes wouldn't reach over 120 pics. And... That's why I'm delaying the finale... It'll have the most pictures in the whole series (so over 221 pics) and I still need to add the finishing touches on the script. And the way the episode is, 50 of the pics will take awhile to set up and take becuase of what's happening. Scripts would be more organized but I'm too lazy and find it easier to just dive in and wing it.... |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 12, 2014 17:16:19 GMT -5
I can't really put Resolute on my resume since it was an adapted screenplay. Then simply put it under the "Adaptation" Category |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Mar 12, 2014 17:17:01 GMT -5
Come on man, little more confident I think i'll do one like this for ROTR too. Well, I like my series, but I don't think it's anything spectacular. And lol, I didn't mean for this to be a thing to catch on. I was just trying to be humorous. That's fine I get it now |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 12, 2014 18:13:32 GMT -5
The Ruthless Mercenaries: A series that focuses on action more than anything else. There are stakes and some twists and lots of death, but that's pretty much it. The story isn't the best IMO, but it's at least sufficient. But if I do another series (which I might) then that series will have a much better story and overall meaning. The Ruthless Merceanries has no overall meaning besides bounty hunters and action. Or well... the way the finale will ends may make it have somewhat of a point... But nothing huge. Lol, yeah, that about sums it up in a sentence or two. Lol most of my episodes eventually break out in a random fight as well... However I've kept my episodes kind of short not necessarily intentionally... But I think if people don't like the story, they don't have to click through that many pictures... Not that long episodes are bad it depends on the viewer's taste.. I might make my episodes longer actually so more stuff can happen.. I liked the first season of your series, I almost finished it in a day and had like one episode left but I still haven't got back into it yet for some reason. |
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Mar 12, 2014 18:29:51 GMT -5
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Post by Star on Mar 12, 2014 18:29:51 GMT -5
Part of the reason my episodes are longer is becuase I write a script. If I just took pics and added text later, I can guarantee you my episodes wouldn't reach over 120 pics. And... That's why I'm delaying the finale... It'll have the most pictures in the whole series (so over 221 pics) and I still need to add the finishing touches on the script. And the way the episode is, 50 of the pics will take awhile to set up and take becuase of what's happening. Scripts would be more organized but I'm too lazy and find it easier to just dive in and wing it.... I actually did that for my prologue I did leading up to my game. I got about 30 pics into it before I realized it'd be really hard to go back and type exactly what I wanted when taking the pics. Plus it felt less organized to me and I didn't like it. I wanted everything to be planned out. So I scrapped those pics, wrote a script, and then took all those pics that made up my prologue to what it is now. And now I write scripts so it turns out better when i do stuff. It works for me. Just like diving right in works for you. Yeah, kinda a fun fact. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Mar 15, 2014 19:50:10 GMT -5
Think it's all updated.
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Post by Star on Mar 15, 2014 21:19:59 GMT -5
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Post by Star on Mar 15, 2014 21:59:05 GMT -5
No problem. It's a lot of links. Besides, you haven't kept up with my series to know about those episodes. |
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Post by Star on Mar 31, 2014 22:23:29 GMT -5
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Post by Spidyyr on Apr 19, 2014 14:10:04 GMT -5
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 18, 2014 17:04:52 GMT -5
I think I'm caught up on all of these.
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I think i'll do one like this for ROTR too. 
it’s been quite a while. I’ve been pretty good, how about yourself? 