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Post by Star on Sept 20, 2014 21:08:37 GMT -5
I also believe that this is my best story stuff I've done yet. Maybe that's just me, but let me know what you think it's like compared to TRM or my Prologue to the Saga I released over a year ago (I won't count SOT since that was probably my weakest despite it help set up a much better story for this game). I just liked how I was able to really make a more complex and darker story with more to it. TRM was more of a test, so it wasn't the best writing I could do. This is much better I think and will hopefully continue to get better as the game progresses and anything I do after this. Enough of my opinions though. I'd rather hear your's (even if they're not too positive. Constructive criticism is still really helpful.  ) Now, after 9 months of working on this, the prologue is finally complete. I hope it was at least somewhat worth the wait. |
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Post by Star on Sept 20, 2014 21:17:22 GMT -5
I've also got some character development spread throughout the 3 parts, particularly this one, so I'm curious to see which characters you like or dislike once completing part 3.
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Post by Spidyyr on Sept 21, 2014 21:02:38 GMT -5
You probably could have divided this into two parts.... Well here goes  |
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Post by Star on Sept 21, 2014 21:16:00 GMT -5
You probably could have divided this into two parts.... Well here goes I could've but.... Hmmmm.... Probably should've to made it easier. I think it worked better as 1 though. Plus I don't know what I would name one of those parts. At least I made the way this is set up have a few spots where it's a good point to stop watching/reading and continue later. Btw, those spots would probably be any of these: (pic) 123, 219, or 333. After pic 333, it all flows together pretty fast, so I'd recommend watching that all together if you can (not the end of the world if you can't of course, but I think it'd make more sense to watch pics 334-669 all at once rather than pics 1-333. But it's up to you. |
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Post by Star on Sept 21, 2014 21:34:32 GMT -5
Oh, there's also a hidden scene in part 3 that occurs in the background of like 15 pics. It's near the beginning as a hint. Just a fun fact. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Sept 21, 2014 21:50:31 GMT -5
Watched 1-333.
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Post by Star on Sept 21, 2014 22:03:44 GMT -5
Probably a good stopping point. Glad you're watching it.  |
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Post by Potato on Sept 22, 2014 0:11:29 GMT -5
I saw Part 2 a while ago but forgot to comment... It was interesting but I think it will pick up a lot more now with Barst (I started watching Part 3 but it will probably take a bit longer to finish). |
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Post by Star on Sept 22, 2014 16:42:33 GMT -5
I saw Part 2 a while ago but forgot to comment... It was interesting but I think it will pick up a lot more now with Barst (I started watching Part 3 but it will probably take a bit longer to finish). Yeah, Barst is a big character. I remember I said that I had major plans for Barst in the story/as a character during TRM. Now they're beginning. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Sept 22, 2014 17:29:23 GMT -5
Bane kinda annoyed me in Part 3. It seemed like he was trying to set Barst off.
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Post by Star on Sept 22, 2014 21:14:07 GMT -5
Bane kinda annoyed me in Part 3. It seemed like he was trying to set Barst off. Maybe he is...  No, I was actually trying to make him seem a little meaner again since I felt I was making him a little too nice at the end of TRM. After all, he's neer really been "nice" to those he's worked with. Even though Barst's different, he still should be a little harsher once in a while, mainly cause that's his character. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Sept 22, 2014 22:00:26 GMT -5
Bane kinda annoyed me in Part 3. It seemed like he was trying to set Barst off. Maybe he is... No, I was actually trying to make him seem a little meaner again since I felt I was making him a little too nice at the end of TRM. After all, he's neer really been "nice" to those he's worked with. Even though Barst's different, he still should be a little harsher once in a while, mainly cause that's his character. Well TCW Bane wouldn't give a Potato Rules about Barst's old life. |
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Post by Star on Sept 22, 2014 22:05:41 GMT -5
Maybe he is... No, I was actually trying to make him seem a little meaner again since I felt I was making him a little too nice at the end of TRM. After all, he's neer really been "nice" to those he's worked with. Even though Barst's different, he still should be a little harsher once in a while, mainly cause that's his character. Well TCW Bane wouldn't give a Potato Rules about Barst's old life. True. But you could also explain that as a result of Bane growing closer towards Barst. So it's kind of 50/50 with him. Half of his character is like him from TCW. The other half is his personality and how it's slowly changing according to life on Trazibar. |
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Post by Kenbo on Sept 23, 2014 6:17:58 GMT -5
I started part 2.. I got to picture 206 will finish the rest later  |
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Post by Kenbo on Sept 23, 2014 6:18:42 GMT -5
But yeah it's a really good story so far I think I like it more than the last prologue probably because it has a lot more Star Wars elements
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Post by Kenbo on Sept 23, 2014 20:35:43 GMT -5
Finished part 2
Mysterious cloaked guy is mysterious
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Post by Star on Sept 23, 2014 21:15:29 GMT -5
But yeah it's a really good story so far I think I like it more than the last prologue probably because it has a lot more Star Wars elements Thanks |
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Post by Star on Sept 27, 2014 15:00:03 GMT -5
I am going to create a confirmation thread soon. I'm not sure exactly when I'll start the game. I know it'll start somewhat soon though. Next weekend is a possibility if I'm not too busy. But that'd be the earliest I'd start it. I may push it back to that week itself. But yeah, expect this to start in like 7-12 days. I'll probably put up the confirmation thread soon, if not today, to make sure I know who's playing. So this is just an update on the game.
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) Now, after 9 months of working on this, the prologue is finally complete. I hope it was at least somewhat worth the wait. 
