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Post by Namialus on Nov 24, 2013 21:11:18 GMT -5
Chapter Twenty - End This War www.fanfiction.net/s/9828889/20/The-Nami-Part-II-An-Alliance-of-LightWINNERS: Potato - SITH Boba - SITH Malgus - SITH Thanks for playing, all of you!  (Sorry, but the last few chapters were rushed.) Please leave any thoughts you had on the game in the comments below. Also, I did what I did earlier because by Day 5 the scum were equal with the loyals. If anything, they were outnumbered, because Ivar didn't win (no offense, but it was because of inactivity) which left Mav and Obi against three Sith. The Sith won. The characters will return in Nami III - The War of the Namaru |
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Post by Namialus on Nov 24, 2013 21:11:49 GMT -5
Oh yeah and I'd leave feedback for all of you but there really isn't much to go on considering the amount of discussion.
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Post by Star on Nov 24, 2013 21:15:42 GMT -5
Oh yeah and I'd leave feedback for all of you but there really isn't much to go on considering the amount of discussion. It was like this for TOTR and some of my game. This forum has slowly been getting quieter... |
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Post by Kenbo on Nov 24, 2013 21:17:58 GMT -5
Mm
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Post by Namialus on Nov 24, 2013 21:21:07 GMT -5
Oh yeah and I'd leave feedback for all of you but there really isn't much to go on considering the amount of discussion. It was like this for TOTR and some of my game. This forum has slowly been getting quieter... This game didn't come out as good as I imagined it would be.  |
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Post by Potato on Nov 24, 2013 21:24:16 GMT -5
Yay sith. Good job Nam, I liked the story a lot and I always liked reading it. But does this mean our characters aren't coming back? I thought they weren't really dead but I guess they are... Oh, and can I get the graveyard? |
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Post by Newan on Nov 24, 2013 21:25:43 GMT -5
I enjoyed the story and really liked seeing the characters that people created  but the discussion was really boring especially after day 3... |
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Post by Potato on Nov 24, 2013 21:27:52 GMT -5
I enjoyed the story and really liked seeing the characters that people created but the discussion was really boring especially after day 3... I thought the discussion for the first couple days was fine. After that I agreed it got slow, but I think people were asking for too much on the first couple days because it seemed fine to me. I think people just wanted some intense moments (which didn't really happen this game), but the overall discussion for the first couple days wasn't bad. |
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Post by Newan on Nov 24, 2013 21:32:09 GMT -5
I enjoyed the story and really liked seeing the characters that people created but the discussion was really boring especially after day 3... I thought the discussion for the first couple days was fine. After that I agreed it got slow, but I think people were asking for too much on the first couple days because it seemed fine to me. I think people just wanted some intense moments (which didn't really happen this game), but the overall discussion for the first couple days wasn't bad. I guess it wasn't bad maybe I just didn't find the discussion interesting this game then  no offence just seemed slow (not the hosting but people talking). |
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Post by Malgus on Nov 24, 2013 21:37:17 GMT -5
Yay! Great job hosting Nam I really liked to story. |
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Post by Namialus on Nov 24, 2013 21:38:10 GMT -5
Yay sith. Good job Nam, I liked the story a lot and I always liked reading it. But does this mean our characters aren't coming back? I thought they weren't really dead but I guess they are... Oh, and can I get the graveyard? The decision to kill your three characters had much thought behind it. (really) Originally they were to escape alongside Soraz as they are loyal to Kluros, but really, your characters were just possessed Jedi, in essence. They needed Kluros' Namaru to survive, not Sadun's. Sorry. Anyway, yes, I'll send the graveyard. |
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Post by Namialus on Nov 24, 2013 21:38:29 GMT -5
Yay! Great job hosting Nam I really liked to story. Thank you |
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Post by Namialus on Nov 24, 2013 21:39:31 GMT -5
As I said in my panel, this was merely a bridge to Nami III. It had to set up everything for it.
I'll start working on that in Spring Break.
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Post by Namialus on Nov 24, 2013 21:42:53 GMT -5
The Sith base and graveyard have been sent to everyone.
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Post by Namialus on Nov 24, 2013 21:44:14 GMT -5
In total, Nami II was 108 pages long in novel form. This makes me happy. |
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Post by Potato on Nov 24, 2013 22:36:59 GMT -5
So is the third game the last? Will there be more Nami games after it?
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Post by Namialus on Nov 24, 2013 23:28:38 GMT -5
So is the third game the last? Will there be more Nami games after it? No. Originally, yes, there was going to be a fourth game to end it all but it works much better as a trilogy and I did not want to stretch it out. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 24, 2013 23:55:57 GMT -5
Great game nam. I had fun playing. The story was fun to read and I was addicted to it like crack. Poor dsak. I would like some feedback please. Also this game did turn out well people were inactive not because of the game but because it has been really quiet lately.
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Nov 25, 2013 2:02:55 GMT -5
I think I'll start off by saying your story was a truly thrilling read Namialus I can definitely tell you this would make for an awesome novel. Lucas Books should publish your story. Next, I must say I'm sorry about the inactivity. I tried to be more active than last game, but I had an unfortunate knack where whenever I was on, no one else was That's time zones for you. However, with next game I will try all I can to be as active as time will allow me. Thirdly, I want to congratulate the scum. I was pretty close to getting Boba voted off, but I probably was going to lose either way So all in all, this was a magnificent sequel and I'm already rubbing my hands for the next one |
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Post by Namialus on Nov 25, 2013 15:17:11 GMT -5
Great game nam. I had fun playing. The story was fun to read and I was addicted to it like crack. Poor dsak. I would like some feedback please. Also this game did turn out well people were inactive not because of the game but because it has been really quiet lately. Thanks! And as for feedback, from what I can remember you seemed more active than your last games and you knew what you were doing. |
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Post by Namialus on Nov 25, 2013 15:17:34 GMT -5
I think I'll start off by saying your story was a truly thrilling read Namialus I can definitely tell you this would make for an awesome novel. Lucas Books should publish your story. Next, I must say I'm sorry about the inactivity. I tried to be more active than last game, but I had an unfortunate knack where whenever I was on, no one else was That's time zones for you. However, with next game I will try all I can to be as active as time will allow me. Thirdly, I want to congratulate the scum. I was pretty close to getting Boba voted off, but I probably was going to lose either way So all in all, this was a magnificent sequel and I'm already rubbing my hands for the next one Thanks Mav! As for your activity, I think you were one of the most active. |
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Post by bobafett590 on Nov 25, 2013 15:28:20 GMT -5
Another scum win! I really enjoyed the game and its story Nam! |
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Post by bane on Nov 25, 2013 16:49:57 GMT -5
The story was very good Nam. |
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Post by Namialus on Nov 25, 2013 18:03:25 GMT -5
So is the third game the last? Will there be more Nami games after it? Actuallyyyy... however, I may or may not be doing a series following another aspect of the story. It'll follow the Sith. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 22:48:54 GMT -5
I think I'll start off by saying your story was a truly thrilling read Namialus I can definitely tell you this would make for an awesome novel. Lucas Books should publish your story. Next, I must say I'm sorry about the inactivity. I tried to be more active than last game, but I had an unfortunate knack where whenever I was on, no one else was That's time zones for you. However, with next game I will try all I can to be as active as time will allow me. Thirdly, I want to congratulate the scum. I was pretty close to getting Boba voted off, but I probably was going to lose either way So all in all, this was a magnificent sequel and I'm already rubbing my hands for the next one I agree. If he would make this into a novel nam should expand this story and leave out the scum stuff because it could bring the story down and may bore someone. |
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Post by Namialus on Nov 26, 2013 15:33:21 GMT -5
I think I'll start off by saying your story was a truly thrilling read Namialus I can definitely tell you this would make for an awesome novel. Lucas Books should publish your story. Next, I must say I'm sorry about the inactivity. I tried to be more active than last game, but I had an unfortunate knack where whenever I was on, no one else was That's time zones for you. However, with next game I will try all I can to be as active as time will allow me. Thirdly, I want to congratulate the scum. I was pretty close to getting Boba voted off, but I probably was going to lose either way So all in all, this was a magnificent sequel and I'm already rubbing my hands for the next one I agree. If he would make this into a novel nam should expand this story and leave out the scum stuff because it could bring the story down and may bore someone. |
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Nov 26, 2013 15:36:10 GMT -5
That was a great game Nam  don't feel too bad about the amount of discussion. It happens to all games at some point. Also i think the story was once again one of the best one in AG's history yet. |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Nov 26, 2013 15:40:50 GMT -5
Was I the only one who nodded in agreement with everything Amona said? |
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Post by Potato on Nov 26, 2013 15:42:09 GMT -5
Was I the only one who nodded in agreement with everything Amona said? Amona sort of annoyed me.... |
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Post by Kenbo on Nov 26, 2013 15:44:36 GMT -5
Was I the only one who nodded in agreement with everything Amona said? Amona sort of annoyed me.... *insert caps lock rage spam from Nam* |
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(Sorry, but the last few chapters were rushed.) Please leave any thoughts you had on the game in the comments below. 
but the discussion was really boring especially after day 3...
no offence just seemed slow (not the hosting but people talking).
don't feel too bad about the amount of discussion. It happens to all games at some point.
