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Post by Star on Nov 26, 2013 21:14:55 GMT -5
I'm writing the script for Episode 4. It's going to be a mature episode. But please know that although its pretty dark, it's meant to develop some characters and help make the episode more emotional.  |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 29, 2013 13:04:36 GMT -5
Good episode star. I think they will remain loyal to each other for now, but I think something down the road may happen.
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Post by Star on Nov 29, 2013 22:18:03 GMT -5
Good episode star. I think they will remain loyal to each other for now, but I think something down the road may happen. Thanks!  And the next episode will show if they stay loyal at first. |
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Post by Star on Dec 4, 2013 22:33:29 GMT -5
Episode 4 will air in two days. It is titled: Heartache.
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Post by Star on Dec 6, 2013 17:56:15 GMT -5
Episode 4 ~ Heartachewww.flickr.com/photos/104822205@N05/11229719185/This episode is going to be a lot more mature than the rest (heads up) but its to develop the characters and make you feel more attached to them instead of not caring. This episode also sets the tone for the rest of the series. And after this episode, only one more to go until break. Hope you like the episode. |
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Post by Kenbo on Dec 6, 2013 19:01:28 GMT -5
Lots of sexy time is implied....  |
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Post by Potato on Dec 6, 2013 21:50:22 GMT -5
Cool episode and I sort of had a feeling those people would die from the start...  |
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Post by Star on Dec 6, 2013 22:08:10 GMT -5
Lots of sexy time is implied.... LOL yes... Cool episode and I sort of had a feeling those people would die from the start... I suppose it was a somewhat obvious, but I was just trying to make you like the characters enough so you wouldn't want them to die. |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Dec 7, 2013 16:27:19 GMT -5
That was sad Star  And I was starting to like them after you sent me it xD... Well dang.... But its my favorite episode out of them all, and I liked how she wanted to die instead of surviving the whole ordeal. Quite original, and not very cliche! Good job |
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Post by Star on Dec 7, 2013 23:06:36 GMT -5
That was sad Star And I was starting to like them after you sent me it xD... Well dang.... But its my favorite episode out of them all, and I liked how she wanted to die instead of surviving the whole ordeal. Quite original, and not very cliche! Good job Thanks a lot CBK! |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Dec 7, 2013 23:09:17 GMT -5
That was sad Star And I was starting to like them after you sent me it xD... Well dang.... But its my favorite episode out of them all, and I liked how she wanted to die instead of surviving the whole ordeal. Quite original, and not very cliche! Good job Thanks a lot CBK! No Problemo! |
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Post by Star on Dec 7, 2013 23:11:35 GMT -5
Thanks a lot CBK! No Problemo! Who did you like better: Tyler or Katie? I think I know who. And did you have a favorite scene? |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Dec 7, 2013 23:13:55 GMT -5
No Problemo! Who did you like better: Tyler or Katie? I think I know who. And did you have a favorite scene? Katie just because of how she died, and that's my favorite scene. And saddest :'( |
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Post by Star on Dec 7, 2013 23:20:08 GMT -5
Who did you like better: Tyler or Katie? I think I know who. And did you have a favorite scene? Katie just because of how she died, and that's my favorite scene. And saddest :'( I probably agree with this. And I was originally going to make this episode more emotional for Tyler but nice I got the bar idea scene I switched it. I think I like how it was mainly about a girl this episode instead of a boy. And also, this episode may actually be more emotional than episode 5 (still not sure) but the next episode wil have more to it. |
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Post by ?6 (CBK) on Dec 7, 2013 23:22:23 GMT -5
Katie just because of how she died, and that's my favorite scene. And saddest :'( I probably agree with this. And I was originally going to make this episode more emotional for Tyler but nice I got the bar idea scene I switched it. I think I like how it was mainly about a girl this episode instead of a boy. And also, this episode may actually be more emotional than episode 5 (still not sure) but the next episode wil have more to it. Your not gonna throw in one of those, "She returned from the dead!". And live? |
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Post by Star on Dec 7, 2013 23:25:00 GMT -5
I probably agree with this. And I was originally going to make this episode more emotional for Tyler but nice I got the bar idea scene I switched it. I think I like how it was mainly about a girl this episode instead of a boy. And also, this episode may actually be more emotional than episode 5 (still not sure) but the next episode wil have more to it. Your not gonna throw in one of those, "She returned from the dead!". And live? Do you mean Katie is actually alive? Maybe... No, JK But there are references to this episode in the next. |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 8, 2013 16:25:33 GMT -5
That was sad. When flashbacks of how they met arise then I had a feeing that they'd die. That bartender was just...a hoe. The drunk fred scene was well done. His actions totally resembled a drunk persons actions. Good episode.
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Post by Star on Dec 8, 2013 18:30:54 GMT -5
That was sad. When flashbacks of how they met arise then I had a feeing that they'd die. That bartender was just...a hoe. The drunk fred scene was well done. His actions totally resembled a drunk persons actions. Good episode. Thanks! And lol. But yeah, I tried make best to make that scene pretty realistic but not too inappropriate. |
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Post by Star on Dec 8, 2013 23:54:35 GMT -5
I hope none of you are too fond of children...  |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2013 0:08:14 GMT -5
I hope none of you are too fond of children... I hate children. |
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Post by Star on Dec 9, 2013 17:18:22 GMT -5
I hope none of you are too fond of children... I hate children.  |
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Post by Kenbo on Dec 9, 2013 18:02:52 GMT -5
Children are evil bad bad children |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2013 18:36:00 GMT -5
Children are evil bad bad children Agreed. Children cause commotion and always cry. They disrupt the peace everywhere. They never shut up. Have you ever been in a movie theatre with children who don't shut the hell up. It is so rude that their parents would take them to places like that. I spent money to go watch that movie and wanted to enjoy myself rather then hear those little fers crying or whatever. |
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Post by Star on Dec 9, 2013 22:53:29 GMT -5
Children are evil bad bad children Agreed. Children cause commotion and always cry. They disrupt the peace everywhere. They never shut up. Have you ever been in a movie theatre with children who don't shut the hell up. It is so rude that their parents would take them to places like that. I spent money to go watch that movie and wanted to enjoy myself rather then hear those little fers crying or whatever. What about good children or ones who have diseases or something like that? Do you hate them too? |
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Post by Star on Dec 9, 2013 22:54:52 GMT -5
Finished the script for this episode. It'll be almost exactly the same length as Heartache (just a couple pics more). And it should be pretty emotional too. Also, there's a neat ending...  |
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Post by Potato on Dec 10, 2013 17:18:10 GMT -5
Agreed. Children cause commotion and always cry. They disrupt the peace everywhere. They never shut up. Have you ever been in a movie theatre with children who don't shut the hell up. It is so rude that their parents would take them to places like that. I spent money to go watch that movie and wanted to enjoy myself rather then hear those little fers crying or whatever. What about good children or ones who have diseases or something like that? Do you hate them too? Not to mention that everyone has once been a child. |
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Post by Star on Dec 10, 2013 17:33:38 GMT -5
What about good children or ones who have diseases or something like that? Do you hate them too? Not to mention that everyone has once been a child. Yeah, and technically most of us are children too. |
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Post by Star on Dec 10, 2013 17:35:03 GMT -5
Not really important, but I wanted to have an episode air the same day as TDOS came out. And this next episode will do just that. |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 10, 2013 17:39:02 GMT -5
What about good children or ones who have diseases or something like that? Do you hate them too? Not to mention that everyone has once been a child. Ya but now we aren't children. I consider the annoying children 8 years or younger. |
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Post by Star on Dec 13, 2013 23:01:51 GMT -5
Sorry for the wait. Here's episode 5. Increasing Sorrowswww.flickr.com/photos/104822205@N05/11330109104/So yeah, that's it for The Ruthless Mercenaries this year. It will continue in early 2014. Hope you liked how the series ended before its break. |
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And the next episode will show if they stay loyal at first. 
And I was starting to like them after you sent me it xD... Well dang.... But its my favorite episode out of them all, and I liked how she wanted to die instead of surviving the whole ordeal. Quite original, and not very cliche! Good job 
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