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Oct 7, 2013 16:30:01 GMT -5
Post by Newan on Oct 7, 2013 16:30:01 GMT -5
 I'm the master at making hated villains! I want to make sure no one is rooting for the bad guy. Well, that shouldn't be the case in storytelling... you want to make all your characters interesting...  But I meant to do that with Kluros because he's really just a plot device needed to push the story along and nothing more. I was really rooting for the Villains to kill everyone in your story... No offence... |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:32:00 GMT -5
Post by Spidyyr on Oct 7, 2013 16:32:00 GMT -5
I'm the master at making hated villains! I want to make sure no one is rooting for the bad guy. Well, that shouldn't be the case in storytelling... you want to make all your characters interesting... But I meant to do that with Kluros because he's really just a plot device needed to push the story along and nothing more. Well I want to make them interesting and reasons for what they do but I still want the player to not want them to win. |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:33:25 GMT -5
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Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 16:33:25 GMT -5
Well, that shouldn't be the case in storytelling... you want to make all your characters interesting... But I meant to do that with Kluros because he's really just a plot device needed to push the story along and nothing more. I was really rooting for the Villains to kill everyone in your story... No offence... Say goodbye to Bulla. |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:33:57 GMT -5
Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 16:33:57 GMT -5
Well, that shouldn't be the case in storytelling... you want to make all your characters interesting... But I meant to do that with Kluros because he's really just a plot device needed to push the story along and nothing more. Well I want to make them interesting and reasons for what they do but I still want the player to not want them to win. Well, when you've got a Chevin.... sigh. |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:34:35 GMT -5
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Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 16:34:35 GMT -5
Honestly, those FF accounts that read The Nami without being players on the AGs must have been really confused as to why ANYONE would write about a Sith Chevin.
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Oct 7, 2013 16:35:49 GMT -5
Post by Newan on Oct 7, 2013 16:35:49 GMT -5
I was really rooting for the Villains to kill everyone in your story... No offence... Say goodbye to Bulla. Ill just make one of his sons. And Bulla was the best characters as VOTED by the players. |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:37:19 GMT -5
Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 16:37:19 GMT -5
Ill just make one of his sons. And Bulla was the best characters as VOTED by the players. THEY ARE MOCKING ME |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:37:48 GMT -5
Post by Newan on Oct 7, 2013 16:37:48 GMT -5
Ill just make one of his sons. And Bulla was the best characters as VOTED by the players. THEY ARE MOCKING ME No no no he was fan favourite. |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:38:29 GMT -5
Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 16:38:29 GMT -5
No no no he was fan favourite. Characters like Soraz and Whitaker were fan-favourites... |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:39:43 GMT -5
Post by Newan on Oct 7, 2013 16:39:43 GMT -5
No no no he was fan favourite. Characters like Soraz and Whitaker were fan-favourites... HA you know Bulla made the game better don't lie he started all that discussion day 1 with his craziness. |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:41:09 GMT -5
Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 16:41:09 GMT -5
Characters like Soraz and Whitaker were fan-favourites... HA you know Bulla made the game better don't lie he started all that discussion day 1 with his craziness. ... |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:43:47 GMT -5
Post by bane on Oct 7, 2013 16:43:47 GMT -5
If I ever make a game, (which I will at some point) there will be no characters like Bulla... :maul:They will have to fit the game theme or get lost.  |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:45:47 GMT -5
Post by Kenbo on Oct 7, 2013 16:45:47 GMT -5
If I ever make a game, (which I will at some point) there will be no characters like Bulla... :maul:They will have to fit the game theme or get lost.  |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:46:04 GMT -5
Post by Newan on Oct 7, 2013 16:46:04 GMT -5
I'm looking through a list of SW species I don't want a Chevin actually.
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Oct 7, 2013 16:46:47 GMT -5
Post by bane on Oct 7, 2013 16:46:47 GMT -5
If I ever make a game, (which I will at some point) there will be no characters like Bulla... :maul:They will have to fit the game theme or get lost. Won't that be nice. |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:48:27 GMT -5
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Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 16:48:27 GMT -5
Won't that be nice. I had no reason to say no to Bulla though.. he fit all the specifications.. ;_; |
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Oct 7, 2013 16:49:12 GMT -5
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Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 16:49:12 GMT -5
Working on the intro now. I don't know why I'm doing it right now but I'm in the writing mood and that is very rare and should never be wasted.
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Post by Newan on Oct 7, 2013 16:53:04 GMT -5
Working on the intro now. I don't know why I'm doing it right now but I'm in the writing mood and that is very rare and should never be wasted. I think I may make a female but it will be a species no one probably heard of... |
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Oct 7, 2013 17:16:15 GMT -5
Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 17:16:15 GMT -5
So here's a little preview...
The damaged droid lay paralyzed in the snow. It did not understand how it arrived there, or where it had been before. Only the confusion of white surrounded it. The droid began to remember that it was on a ship, a cargo freighter, before it was thrown off flying above these snow-covered lands by a figure who needed the weak droid no more. The droid then remembered hearing the cries of a child. "Lu!" the young female had cried as the old droid was pushed off, its internal parts being damaged by the kick of that horrible man. What did "Lu" mean, the droid wondered. Living species never truly cared for us droids, it began to think. Calculating its remaining power supply, the droid found that it only had nine minutes of life left. Perhaps life was not the correct term, it thought. Were droids ever truly alive?
"Yes," said a man, emerging from the storm in a grey cloak. The droid was startled; how could the man have heard it? Leaning near the droid, he wiped off the frost surrounding its vision. Eyeing him, the droid realized he was young, not more than thirty years old. But something about him felt so much more...
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Post by Spidyyr on Oct 7, 2013 17:20:10 GMT -5
Oh yah, Whitaker Atlas was in this game!
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Oct 7, 2013 17:50:36 GMT -5
Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 17:50:36 GMT -5
Another preview:
The figure ran through the sands of Korriban. "Betrayed," he thought, "I was betrayed!" His speed increased with his rage, and, reaching a cliff edge, the figure took a great leap into the chasm below. He landed in front of two great doors guarded by two Sith statues resting above a staircase. The statues were giant cloaked figures holding axes, and the doors had been carved with symbols of old Sith brotherhoods. The old brotherhoods were now extinct, united and taken over by one Sith Lord named Darth Kluros, who, with the power of his newfound blade, wiped out any Sith rivals on Korriban. None could stand against his power, and many died refusing submission. "I was betrayed because of him," shouted the figure, "and for that, he will die!" Using the Force, the man pushed the large doors open and jumped into the tomb.
The man was not alone. His screams were heard by another. Creeping above the insane man, the other watched him. She, too, was a Sith, but a Master unlike the intruder. She had mercilessly trained many Sith before, but only one survived her ruthless teachings. She had taught him well, well enough for him to unite all the past Sith brotherhoods and establish himself as their leader. She had taught Kluros himself, and during his massacres on Korriban months ago using the blade she had foreseen, he intended to murder her, but she knew him better than any other and escaped his reign of terror. Now it was her turn to strike...
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Post by bane on Oct 7, 2013 17:53:52 GMT -5
You're getting me excited, Nam.  |
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Post by Kenbo on Oct 7, 2013 18:03:20 GMT -5
Another preview: The figure ran through the sands of Korriban. "Betrayed," he thought, "I was betrayed!" His speed increased with his rage, and, reaching a cliff edge, the figure took a great leap into the chasm below. He landed in front of two great doors guarded by two Sith statues resting above a staircase. The statues were giant cloaked figures holding axes, and the doors had been carved with symbols of old Sith brotherhoods. The old brotherhoods were now extinct, united and taken over by one Sith Lord named Darth Kluros, who, with the power of his newfound blade, wiped out any Sith rivals on Korriban. None could stand against his power, and many died refusing submission. "I was betrayed because of him," shouted the figure, "and for that, he will die!" Using the Force, the man pushed the large doors open and jumped into the tomb.
The man was not alone. His screams were heard by another. Creeping above the insane man, the other watched him. She, too, was a Sith, but a Master unlike the intruder. She had mercilessly trained many Sith before, but only one survived her ruthless teachings. She had taught him well, well enough for him to unite all the past Sith brotherhoods and establish himself as their leader. She had taught Kluros himself, and during his massacres on Korriban months ago using the blade she had foreseen, he intended to murder her, but she knew him better than any other and escaped his reign of terror. Now it was her turn to strike... Stahp |
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Oct 7, 2013 18:14:29 GMT -5
Post by Newan on Oct 7, 2013 18:14:29 GMT -5
Well I got a pretty cool character |
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Oct 7, 2013 18:17:13 GMT -5
Post by Kenbo on Oct 7, 2013 18:17:13 GMT -5
I might just make someone exactly like Whitaker Atlas but replace white robes with black ones and black hair with brown hair and blue eyes with gray eyes and name him Ahitaker Watlas... Is that coo nam
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Oct 7, 2013 18:56:05 GMT -5
Post by Star on Oct 7, 2013 18:56:05 GMT -5
I might just make someone exactly like Whitaker Atlas but replace white robes with black ones and black hair with brown hair and blue eyes with gray eyes and name him Ahitaker Watlas... Is that coo nam Cool. |
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Oct 7, 2013 18:59:08 GMT -5
Post by Kenbo on Oct 7, 2013 18:59:08 GMT -5
I might just make someone exactly like Whitaker Atlas but replace white robes with black ones and black hair with brown hair and blue eyes with gray eyes and name him Ahitaker Watlas... Is that coo nam Cool. No it's not  |
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Oct 7, 2013 19:00:48 GMT -5
Post by Star on Oct 7, 2013 19:00:48 GMT -5
Cool. No it's not Yes, it is. 8000 posts! WOOHOO! |
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Oct 7, 2013 19:01:57 GMT -5
Post by Kenbo on Oct 7, 2013 19:01:57 GMT -5
No it's not Yes, it is. 8000 posts! WOOHOO! But the name is growing on me... Not the Watlas part, that sounds ridiculous... And good for chu..... |
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Oct 7, 2013 19:34:05 GMT -5
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Post by Namialus on Oct 7, 2013 19:34:05 GMT -5
I might just make someone exactly like Whitaker Atlas but replace white robes with black ones and black hair with brown hair and blue eyes with gray eyes and name him Ahitaker Watlas... Is that coo nam I know you can do better. |
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I'm the master at making hated villains! I want to make sure no one is rooting for the bad guy. 
But I meant to do that with Kluros because he's really just a plot device needed to push the story along and nothing more. 
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