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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Jun 2, 2013 11:26:56 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure you'll do fine  You're a great storyteller. I have the same problem with romance as with my book series. I haven't reached any romantic part of it yet, but I'm a little nervous about how I go about it, so my game could serve as a test bed for it  It's difficult but not impossible. It just has to appear natural. And should have a reason why it's there and why those two are in love. And ofcourse try to keep the dialogue natural as well. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 2, 2013 11:27:58 GMT -5
And I'm not an emotional person at all so I'm not the one to try this |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jun 2, 2013 11:29:30 GMT -5
I have the same problem with romance as with my book series. I haven't reached any romantic part of it yet, but I'm a little nervous about how I go about it, so my game could serve as a test bed for it It's difficult but not impossible. It just has to appear natural. And should have a reason why it's there and why those two are in love. And ofcourse try to keep the dialogue natural as well. Yeah, dialogue is one of the hardest parts for me. I think I can get the feeling right, but how to put those feelings into words that aren't so cringeworthy is what's going to be a challenge for me. Luckily, I like taking on literary challenges  |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 2, 2013 20:22:48 GMT -5
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Post by Scruffy the Clone (Scruffy) on Jun 2, 2013 21:24:31 GMT -5
I suck at Romance, so I never include it with anything. I fail at romantic dialogue...
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Jun 3, 2013 14:40:13 GMT -5
And I'm not an emotional person at all so I'm not the one to try this Well (s you've all probably noticed in my games) i am. But i don't know if i will try it. Maybe the Series is a good way to try it out? But it has to come natural and serve the story, i don't want it to be forced or just to be there because we could. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 4, 2013 21:20:22 GMT -5
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Jun 5, 2013 1:29:56 GMT -5
Looks really cool! So Ventress and Bane will have big roles as well? That's interesting. |
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Post by Star on Jun 5, 2013 18:10:57 GMT -5
I like the poster, Spider. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 7, 2013 9:16:43 GMT -5
Note: The following content is rated PG-13 by the SW78 association for Violent Images and Language.
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Post by Star on Jun 7, 2013 10:11:30 GMT -5
Nice episode! I'm looking forward to the next one.  |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 7, 2013 10:13:29 GMT -5
EP 4 DISCUSSION QUESTION
Does Fives's explanation justify how he treats the men? |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 7, 2013 10:15:09 GMT -5
Nice episode! I'm looking forward to the next one. Thanks |
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Post by Star on Jun 7, 2013 10:21:20 GMT -5
EP 4 DISCUSSION QUESTION
Does Fives's explanation justify how he treats the men? I don't think it does, because all he was saying is that he think he can treat them poorly, since they aren't very good soldiers. Because Cut is a bad soldier, he thinks that he cn just treat him even worse than the others. This does not seem like a good reason to treat them harshly. I he continues to do so, they may not want to sty in the group, and decide to run off, as some have already done. My final opinion is that Fives is being too rouh with them, even if he is training them for battle. |
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Post by Potato on Jun 7, 2013 11:27:45 GMT -5
Great job, Spider! Even though I know what's coming up because I know what movie this is based off of I'm really curious to see how you'll handle it all! |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 7, 2013 11:29:53 GMT -5
Great job, Spider! Even though I know what's coming up because I know what movie this is based off of I'm really curious to see how you'll handle it all! So am I |
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Post by Maverick-Jedi-Valen on Jun 7, 2013 11:44:12 GMT -5
I think Fives is sort of becoming Krell in a way. He has no pity for the weak and has a pretty sorry excuse for it.
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 7, 2013 11:45:27 GMT -5
I think Fives is sort of becoming Krell in a way. He has no pity for the weak and has a pretty sorry excuse for it. Yah. You can tell Jesse's thinking the same thing. |
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Post by Star on Jun 7, 2013 11:45:44 GMT -5
I think Fives is sort of becoming Krell in a way. He has no pity for the weak and has a pretty sorry excuse for it. Yes, it does seem like that. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 7, 2013 12:10:42 GMT -5
Ep 5: The Negotiations might be a little late.
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Post by Kenbo on Jun 7, 2013 13:48:03 GMT -5
Fives needs to take a chill pill........ |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 7, 2013 20:45:26 GMT -5
Part 5 will be up a week from tomorrow or Sunday.
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Post by Cad Bane (Dark) on Jun 7, 2013 21:18:11 GMT -5
It said it was rated PG-13 but I didn't see anything PG-13 related.
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 8, 2013 4:58:16 GMT -5
It said it was rated PG-13 but I didn't see anything PG-13 related. You will. |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 8, 2013 5:01:51 GMT -5
Well most of the episodes don't have any PG-13 content but it'd be kinda weird to have a different rating for 2 or 3 episodes.
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Post by Ivar-Jedi on Jun 8, 2013 6:53:00 GMT -5
Nice episode Spider I'm really wondering how many pictures would be proper for one episode to tell :I |
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Post by Star on Jun 8, 2013 6:59:47 GMT -5
Well most of the episodes don't have any PG-13 content but it'd be kinda weird to have a different rating for 2 or 3 episodes. Are the last three definitely PG-13? |
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Post by Spidyyr on Jun 8, 2013 7:05:41 GMT -5
Well most of the episodes don't have any PG-13 content but it'd be kinda weird to have a different rating for 2 or 3 episodes. Are the last three definitely PG-13? Most likely. |
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Post by Star on Jun 8, 2013 7:06:56 GMT -5
Are the last three definitely PG-13? Most likely. Cool. I like how you work up to it.  |
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Post by Scruffy the Clone (Scruffy) on Jun 8, 2013 8:52:59 GMT -5
EP 4 DISCUSSION QUESTION
Does Fives's explanation justify how he treats the men? They're soldiers. If they went on to the battlefield like that, they'd get worse. They were there by consent, and had an opportunity to leave. There's no excuse for the incompetent ones remaining. |
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You're a great storyteller. 
